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1st/EP.1

by Kookie | Last Updated: April 14, 2017

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April 14, 2017, 12:40 pmAdded music and a bonus scene, and realized how cliche' the story is -.-

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July 17, 2016

You and a girl fall in love, though her mother has an issue with that, her mother is killed by a questionable person. Find out what happens next by playing the game.

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Re: 1st/EP.1

Postby Kookie » Sat Jul 30, 2016 9:31 am

[Reveal] Spoiler:
I ran out of time in other projects so....No Ep.2 i know it's been weeks since i said i would do it,my apologies!!!!
I will not break you unless you deserve to be broken
The world is cruel.. but also exceptionally beautiful
Don't pretend to be my friend if you don't actually care for me
True love is when you'll take all the pain so they can be happy
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Re: 1st/EP.1

Postby Kookie » Wed Jul 20, 2016 1:21 pm

Thank you so much!!!It took me 5 hours!!!!!
I will not break you unless you deserve to be broken
The world is cruel.. but also exceptionally beautiful
Don't pretend to be my friend if you don't actually care for me
True love is when you'll take all the pain so they can be happy
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Re: 1st/EP.1

Postby Lavandulalilium36 » Tue Jul 19, 2016 7:04 pm

It was great for your first novel! I really liked it!! :D
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Re: 1st/EP.1

Postby Kookie » Tue Jul 19, 2016 4:26 pm

What i did was just either refresh the page or wait a little while ,sorry!!!!! XP :sweat: X| :? :shock:
I will not break you unless you deserve to be broken
The world is cruel.. but also exceptionally beautiful
Don't pretend to be my friend if you don't actually care for me
True love is when you'll take all the pain so they can be happy
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Re: 1st/EP.1

Postby SeikaUruru » Tue Jul 19, 2016 3:09 pm

Maakki6 wrote:Yes i will try to fix it if i cant i will put it in the beginning. :3

Okay. By the way, when I tried showing her my home. The loading is stuck on 96%
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Re: 1st/EP.1

Postby Kookie » Tue Jul 19, 2016 1:31 pm

Yes i will try to fix it if i cant i will put it in the beginning. :3
I will not break you unless you deserve to be broken
The world is cruel.. but also exceptionally beautiful
Don't pretend to be my friend if you don't actually care for me
True love is when you'll take all the pain so they can be happy
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Re: 1st/EP.1

Postby SeikaUruru » Mon Jul 18, 2016 8:42 pm

I'm assuming the story is not complete or something because when I showed her to my family, the visual novel disappeared. Like the whole screen. You also mentioned the scenes got corrupted so I'm assuming it might be that too.
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Re: 1st/EP.1

Postby SeikaUruru » Mon Jul 18, 2016 8:30 pm

Maakki6 wrote:I know it went to fast my scene was corrupted sadly :(.I tried fixing it.


I see.
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Re: 1st/EP.1

Postby Kookie » Mon Jul 18, 2016 5:10 pm

I know it went to fast my scene was corrupted sadly :(.I tried fixing it.
I will not break you unless you deserve to be broken
The world is cruel.. but also exceptionally beautiful
Don't pretend to be my friend if you don't actually care for me
True love is when you'll take all the pain so they can be happy
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Re: 1st/EP.1

Postby SeikaUruru » Sun Jul 17, 2016 10:11 pm

It's okay... The character development is... too fast. I know that this is your first visual novel so I'll go easy on your animations and the likes but the story .... is too fast pace. You found a girl at the locker rooms then you ask her name, then she kisses you and you go to an amusement park... At least this is the route I chose... Too fast paced. There's no exception for the story, it's too fast. There was no character development.
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