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haven't drawn in a long time, trying to get back into the swing of things but it just looks so bad, any advice is appreciated
character is Tsurugi from IE: GO
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Fluff
Fluffi'd suggest you to use different colors for shadows and highlights
this is very usefu https://yokoboo.tumblr.com/post/138358905112/shading-colour-tips/amp
this is very usefu https://yokoboo.tumblr.com/post/138358905112/shading-colour-tips/amp
Please note that I am not attacking you but just offer critques to help you improve, I'll try to make the blow as soft as possible. ୧(๑❛ั⌔❛ั๑)୨ ॢ
Firstly, the hands looks off. The perspective of the right hand is off, the middle, fourth and pinky finger shouldn't be showing that much. (I hope I make sense). https://www.pinterest.com/pin/471752129717891235/
Same for the left hand, I understand the position but the structure needs work.
Secondly, I feel that the bottom half of the body looks neglected, not saying you didn't put effort in to the piece, but in comparison to the up half it looks likes there's less attention.╥﹏╥
But, don't worry! I understand that feeling too, sometimes I get too tried and I give places less attention. The trousers should have a few wrinkles and folds, similar to the shirt.
https://www.pinterest.com/pin/640777853212828294/
As for the shadows, I get what you are trying to do, however, there were some parts which shows there were a lot of different light source such as the cape. I think the primary light source is suppose to be at the left, is that right? Then I suggest to have an extra layer that shows the over all shadow.
If that's not the lighting condition you are going for (υ´Д｀), I have some material for you to look at and take reference. (lighting is hard, I am still trying to grasp it too *cries)
https://www.pinterest.com/pin/624030092098868878/
https://www.pinterest.com/pin/575405289887948799/ (This one might be a difficult to grasp)
I hope this helps, if you have any questions, feel free to ask.☆=(ゝω･)/
Firstly, the hands looks off. The perspective of the right hand is off, the middle, fourth and pinky finger shouldn't be showing that much. (I hope I make sense). https://www.pinterest.com/pin/471752129717891235/
Same for the left hand, I understand the position but the structure needs work.
Secondly, I feel that the bottom half of the body looks neglected, not saying you didn't put effort in to the piece, but in comparison to the up half it looks likes there's less attention.╥﹏╥
But, don't worry! I understand that feeling too, sometimes I get too tried and I give places less attention. The trousers should have a few wrinkles and folds, similar to the shirt.
https://www.pinterest.com/pin/640777853212828294/
As for the shadows, I get what you are trying to do, however, there were some parts which shows there were a lot of different light source such as the cape. I think the primary light source is suppose to be at the left, is that right? Then I suggest to have an extra layer that shows the over all shadow.
If that's not the lighting condition you are going for (υ´Д｀), I have some material for you to look at and take reference. (lighting is hard, I am still trying to grasp it too *cries)
https://www.pinterest.com/pin/624030092098868878/
https://www.pinterest.com/pin/575405289887948799/ (This one might be a difficult to grasp)
I hope this helps, if you have any questions, feel free to ask.☆=(ゝω･)/
MelMel said: Please note that I am not attacking you but just offer critques to help you improve, I'll try to make the blow as soft as possible. ୧(๑❛ั⌔❛ั๑)୨ ॢ@MelMel
Firstly, the hands looks off. The perspective of the right hand is off, the middle, fourth and pinky finger shouldn't be showing that much. (I hope I make sense). https://www.pinterest.com/pin/471752129717891235/
Same for the left hand, I understand the position but the structure needs work.
Secondly, I feel that the bottom half of the body looks neglected, not saying you didn't put effort in to the piece, but in comparison to the up half it looks likes there's less attention.╥﹏╥
But, don't worry! I understand that feeling too, sometimes I get too tried and I give places less attention. The trousers should have a few wrinkles and folds, similar to the shirt.
https://www.pinterest.com/pin/640777853212828294/
As for the shadows, I get what you are trying to do, however, there were some parts which shows there were a lot of different light source such as the cape. I think the primary light source is suppose to be at the left, is that right? Then I suggest to have an extra layer that shows the over all shadow.
If that's not the lighting condition you are going for (υ´Д｀), I have some material for you to look at and take reference. (lighting is hard, I am still trying to grasp it too *cries)
https://www.pinterest.com/pin/624030092098868878/
https://www.pinterest.com/pin/575405289887948799/ (This one might be a difficult to grasp)
I hope this helps, if you have any questions, feel free to ask.☆=(ゝω･)/
WOW thank you!! i really appreciate it!! i will put all this into effect :D
made some changes, and decided to go for cell shading, and drew another chara from same game
