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Hey everyone! I'm currently starting a dating sim project, and I wanted some advice on my romanceable character designs. Since part of the success is determined by how nice these characters look, I want to make sure they are really attractive! I have one of four designs currently, and I'd love to know what you think so far!

Here's who I will call Character A for now! He is supposed to look like a bad boy/tsundere type. Since it's my drawing, I'm having trouble telling if he looks attractive... And I'd like to know if you think my style works for dating sim characters?
This is my first time doing something like this, so any critique is helpful! >.<
I think that your character and style are perfect for dating sim work honestly! I think he's pretty and cute! What criticism that I can offer is that maybe put a design/logo on the black part of his outfit. It kind of looks empty without something there.
@RayneIlStorm Thank you for your kind words! And I totally understand what you mean about putting something in that blank area. I'll be sure to update his design with that in mind!
Sonya
Princess
Sonya
Princess
Yes, he looks hot. I'm a straight female and I think he is attractive. I'm not a male, but from my own female standards, the eyes look especially attractive his face shape looks really great too, and the hair coloring makes the overall aesthetic of the character design look great as well. 

Short answer: yes I would date him
@Sonya Thank you! Your compliments are so nice! It's important for me to get multiple perspectives because I want my dating sim to be playable by all genders. I'm really glad you think he's hot! I guess I'm on the right track then haha
Sonya
Princess
Sonya
Princess
squidcolas said: @Sonya Thank you! Your compliments are so nice! It's important for me to get multiple perspectives because I want my dating sim to be playable by all genders. I'm really glad you think he's hot! I guess I'm on the right track then haha
@squidcolas Of course, no problem. Your art style looks great, you're very talented. I can't wait to see what kind of games you'll make!

Here's the design for Character B! He's supposed to be the cute love interest. I'm not sure how I feel about his eye color or his outfit. I hope I can make his design more attractive. Any critique for this character too would be great!
Hmm, I feel like B's outfit is a little odd looking, but that could just be me. Maybe lower the sleeves to the elbows?
@RayneIlStorm I see what you mean! I'll probably change his shirt completely to make it look more natural, but I'll be sure to focus on the sleeve length in my new design. It's hard to try to find an outfit that says cute but practical;; I appreciate your advice again!
Hey there I like the artstyle and so far these boys look fiiiine. :D
A's block hoodie part is a bit too short for my liking tho. I would make it longer so that the red shirt is covered at the bottom torso part.. maybe even to a fusion of the two parts into one hoodie? I think it would suit a bad boy more. The black part reminds me of the schooluniform part that go over the shirt.
B is 1000% my type but I agree with Raynell the sleves look a bit off, a bit longer maybe?
I also love the little heart mark at his neck.
I Also like that color pallette of these boys, so only the cloth shapes bother me :D
@KuroAkiza thank you for your helpful comments! I'll definitely work on those things during the redesign. And I'm glad you like B! I tend to favor cute love interests so I really wanted him to be adorable^^
Am I the only one who noticed the heart on B's neck?
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