I'm a fiction writer currently open for commissions in most genres except anything NC-17 NSFW. I have worked with full pieces of fiction,
short stories, scripts, editing and character development. I have
assisted in shaping and clarifying stories and character development for
many people and have been active with my commissions for nearly 15
years. Currently, my rates are:

Prose: $10 USD per 1,000 words
Scripts: $5 USD per page

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Hello, I just wanted some advice since I'm a new writer. I have this character in one of my visual novels and she is kind of like a tsundere who isn't nice to anyone except her sister. But later in the story I want her to be more open and kind but whenever I try to give her some character development it just feels forced in and cheap. Do you have any advice on how to make her interactions with other characters feel genuine? Thanks