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Intern at the Mark!
Developed by NKane

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Intern at the Mark! | CloudNovel

Finny is about to begin their first job as a Hope Inc. intern! 
. . . That is, if they even manage to get through the morning to meet the client on time. 



Premise
A short, comedic tale of an intern trying to make it through the morning to their first job. Will they finally make it to their client? Or will they be doomed to forever make the same (hilarious) mistakes in the end? And what's with the client thinking they sell cookies?!

Features
- An overly cheery intern that's too good for this world 
- Lots of irony, slightly dark humor, and the inane shenanigans of a walking disaster known as Finny
- Entirely original artwork in an anime-western cartoon style
- Light gameplay (including an interactable bg that I seriously slaved over) 
- Seven different endings (and maybe a secret eighth)
- And a not-so-secret potential villain that you'll likely never encounter.
Unless if you break the laws of physics an unlucky number of times

Finny
A colorful, silly, and super dorky person. If not a bit prone to . . . mishaps. So why not lend a helping hand? :)

BG




Note:
This is my very first visual novel, so I would greatly appreciate any feedback. Especially on the programming and formatting the script into visual novel form. Thank you!
hay man wants me to help you out with some of the dialogue :DD 
maximusthemighty666666 said: hay man wants me to help you out with some of the dialogue :DD 
@maximusthemighty666666 Sure! Can you look over the formatting? I don't have a lot of experience with VN's, and I'm used to formatting my writing for novels. So I'm not entirely sure if prose and dialogue should be in the same line, how formatting works if I place a dialogue tag in the middle of a dialogue, when to start a new line, if quotation marks are really needed, if I have to put the character's name in each textbox they speak in or if I can skip (because there's no way to batch autofill the character's name in every single line they speak in, and it's a hassle for when I realize that I need to split up some portions into separate lines for dramatic timing and realize I have to put names in all of them), etc.
lol I understand man :DD