( yes that was it and sweet ) orison: im a photographer I came here for a study abroad and I want to take pictures of the country side 

"College student, huh? We don't get those around here often."

Orison: oh really?

"Yeah, most people just go straight into labor; can't too find many colleges in this area, and if ya can, it'd take a year to get to it!"

The driver joked, taking a turn to a different road

"Whatcha taking photography for? Most folk would rather be a doctor or some kind of lawyer."

(lol im here)

orison: well I always loved seeing scenery's and everything it can be breath taking 

"Heh, that's one of our specialties; the sunsets here are just gorgeous, you chose the right spot sweetheart."

orison: that was one of the reason I came here I hurd it was amazing 

"This your first time far away from home?"

He looked at Orison from the rear view mirror

orison: ya I never been anywhere this far away from home before but im looking forward to everything this place has to offer 

"Little word of advice, don't trust anyone out here. This place holds secrets, secrets that a young thing like yourself shouldn't be gettin' involved with, don't leave ya house after hours; that'll make you a prime target."

* orison got a shiver down her spine * orison: ill keep that in mind thanks for the advice *she said a bit shyly *

"No prob kid, I have a daughter around your age; you might see her in town, she works at a diner."

orison: really thats need whats her name Id be glad to stop by and say hello (thats good right or should it be more introverted )

(A bit more introverted, like..
"Oh, really? Do you.. mind if I.. ask her name?")

"Her name's Beatrice, I think it's dumb but whatever makes her happy I suppose."