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ThatWriterBoi said:
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ThatWriterBoi said: Name: Reinhart Van Astrea
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Polyamory Open: No
Powers: Divine Protection Of The Sword Saint, Voidless Divinity, Infinite Glass Exposure
Powers Info: Divine Protection - Reinhard is able to possess any Divine Protection he wants, with no limitations. His powers are being stronger during certain times and weather conditions, but if it's raining or night, he becomes massively weak. Mastery of all weapons and most fighting styles, and the ability to see hits before they are done.
Voidless Divinity- A short-ranged attack, allowing the user to slice his enemy to shreds, each hit is equalizing to the power of being pressed down into a mush no matter how big or tall.
Infinite Glass Exposure- A long-ranged attack, being an attack, the user can summon as many swords as he wants but to a limit. And shoot it subsonic-hypersonic speeds.
Weapon(s): The Sword Of Saints
Fighting Style: Aikido, and Swordsmanship.
Brains: 8/10
Block: 7(12 with Divine Protection)/10
Power: 10/10
Speed: 8/10
Agility: 7/10
Weight Class: Middle
Weakness: With Divine Protection, none, with VD anything faster than him can and will be able to dodge the hits with ease as he gets slower while reading a hit, IGE can be countered with anyone with telekinesis or things like that.
Quote: "Aren't you going to use that sword at your hip? Love the chance to experience its legendary sharpness first-hand."
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@ThatWriterBoi (This... ah... maybe it's too vague, but I feel he's OP. Mind you, I don't have a problem with strong characters, but...

1. Divine Protection is multiple unrelated abilities in one with no limit. And the fact that you listed the benefits and said some means that there are more that are unknown. Now, you can have it do different things, though it needs to have a limit in this case. If you look at Teresa, she needs Righteous Might stacks to activate her many abilities, which she gains by hitting people. Oh yes, Divine protection is supposed to be his main abiltity, he doesn't use the others that much as all he uses from it is the eye senses.

2. Voidless Divinity- The fact that it's a short ranged attack that hits multiple times is cool, but the problem is the power. For a reason I'll explain in story, slicing people isn't possible until after you hit them for a certain number of heath points. Though the bigger problem is that anyone, no matter how big or tall, is immediately crushed by this. If it was one strike, I could let this slide, but multiple just turns it into an automatic win move. Voidless Divinity can be multiple strikes, but usually it's too much to hurt Reinhart himself, I write alot of stories with that-


3. Infinite Glass Exposure- The only real problem is the infinite amount of swords. If there was a max number, it'd be good. It's not infinite, did I write that-?

4. I can't say that he doesn't have any weaknesses, but there are a few concerns. Voidless Divinity's weakness, you can leave as is. IGE, again, just put a limit, and it's fine. My real concern is with Divine Protection. I feel that since it has so many uses, there needs to be some sort of balancing act, if that makes sense.

I'm sorry if I'm being strict with this, but there's a main reason for this. If you look at Maki's sheet, he has Deathly Copy, which copies any ability he sees regardless of if he wants to or not. Now, he does explode if he has too many, but guess what happens when he sees Reinhard's abilities and sees them as they are now. 
@CrimsonNinja Reread the thing now.
@ThatWriterBoi (Alright, I'll accept it.)
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Name: Holly
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Bisexual
Polyamory Open: Yes
Powers: Parasite, Projectile Taunt, Weather Control
Powers Info: Parasite is granted to an opponent that Holly hits or gets hit by. When Holly is hit by a projectile, she will heal herself using the health of the person that hit her.
Projectile Taunt forces all projectiles to seek her instead of the original target.
Weather Control allows her to change the weather temporarily in order to use Control Effects. Sunny for Blindness, Darkness for Mind Control, Rain or Hail for Freeze.
Background: She used to be a war weapon since she is practically immune to dying by projectiles. She hides out in forests to play for animals occasionally.
Weapon(s): Nature Flute
Fighting Style: Nature Guardian
Brains: 3/10
Block: 0/10
Power: 5/10
Speed: 7/10
Agility: 4/10
Weight Class: Rock
Weakness: Can't heal from melee attacks unless the opponent has 5 stacks of Parasite on them.
1 stack will go away from an opponent if they don't hit or aren't hit by her for 10 seconds.
Quote: "Nature is my best friend. It bestows me power and never leaves me lonely.
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Name: Aurora
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Polyamory Open: Yes
Powers: Crystallization
Powers Info: Aurora has an advanced form of freezing, this form slowly damages the opponent while they're in the ice. When she attack, she has a 10% chance to Crystallize the target.
Background: The "ice princess" or the city. She has a reverse harem, but not much else is known about her. Though someone stated they saw her smelling a rose once?
Weapon(s): Ice Knives
Fighting Style: ?
Brains: 8/10
Block: 1/10
Power: 6/10
Speed: 10/10
Agility: 7/10
Weight Class: Light
Weakness: Fire and Lightning
Quote: "Ice... it covers and kills everything, not sparing any living creature. Is this my fate?"
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Name: Josuke Monet
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Polyamory Open: No; I have a girlfriend
Powers: Man in the Mirror
Powers Info: Allows the user trap objects or people in an mirror world. 
Limitations: User must have a mirror on them and faced towards the person or object to trap them. The mirror used to trap object or person must be broken or the user drops a drop of their own blood on the mirror to free that object or person from the mirror world.
Background: His father was absent most of his life, leaving his mother to raise him on her own until the age of 14. He wants to piss off his father though his father doesn't.
Weapon(s): Brass Knuckles, Mirror (Power)
Fighting Style: Drunken Fist
Brains: 6.5/10
Block: 5/10
Power: 6/10
Speed: 7/10
Agility: 6/10
Weight Class: Middle
Weakness: He is allergic to pollen
Quote: "Whatever happens, happens."
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(When do we start?)
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kittycat said:

@CrimsonNinja shes pretty)  
@kittycat (Yeah, I have plans for her :) )