kittycat said: is it ok that im simping over my own character?) 

kittycat said: is it ok that im simping over my own character?) 

ThatWriterBoi said:
Name: Takirah Naeson
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Polyamory Open: Yes
Powers: Shift
Powers Info: He can shift his body to unmeasurable speeds, his top being 66 miles per second, and his normal 38. this was reached when he used his special move: Shadow shift, Which allows him to take out multiple people in one shot. He mainly uses this ability for fights When this is activated, his blood circulation goes 10x faster, and his bones tighten harder every second. If he does move as fast as his blood does and untighten his bones. They will shatter
Background: A rich 'prince' in the town, his father Neil Naeson, built the Naeson family. He was mostly quite abusive with his powers of richness, but he doesn't do so anymore his excuse was "I was a child.. (He was 15.), I was naive."
Weapon(s): Scythe
Fighting Style: Taekwondo, Akido.
Brains: 4/5
Power: 3/5
Speed: 5/5
Weight Class: Middle
Weakness: Slight OCD and can get sick sometimes when shifting too fast.

ThatWriterBoi said: Name: Akira Naeson
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Omnisexual
Polyamory Open: No
Powers: Barrier
Powers Info: Akira is capable of creating defensive barriers and can use them as force fields and makeshift traps thanks to his ability, Barrier. His barriers also can also inflict damage by reflecting attacks onto the attacker, Shrinking, Or Enlarging They Are Both Possible For This Quirk. He Can Even Phase Through Them, It Takes 5,000 Pounds Just To Break It. When The Barrier Is Broken, User Will Feel Intense Pain In His Ribs, Almost As If They Have Broken(All Of Them), The Pain Goes Away After A Few Seconds, But He Will Is Left With A Bad Headache, Making It Harder For Him To Move And Fight
Background: The brother of Takirah, and on his mother's side of the family and not his father, he normally leaded Takirah despite being younger.
Weapon(s): None
Fighting Style: Kickboxing and Taekwondo
Brains: 5/5
Power: 5/5
Speed: 3/5
Weight Class: Between Light and Middle
Weakness: Said it already.

CrimsonNinja said:

ThatWriterBoi said:
Name: Takirah Naeson
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Polyamory Open: Yes
Powers: Shift
Powers Info: He can shift his body to unmeasurable speeds, his top being 66 miles per second, and his normal 38. this was reached when he used his special move: Shadow shift, Which allows him to take out multiple people in one shot. He mainly uses this ability for fights When this is activated, his blood circulation goes 10x faster, and his bones tighten harder every second. If he does move as fast as his blood does and untighten his bones. They will shatter
Background: A rich 'prince' in the town, his father Neil Naeson, built the Naeson family. He was mostly quite abusive with his powers of richness, but he doesn't do so anymore his excuse was "I was a child.. (He was 15.), I was naive."
Weapon(s): Scythe
Fighting Style: Taekwondo, Akido.
Brains: 4/5
Power: 3/5
Speed: 5/5
Weight Class: Middle
Weakness: Slight OCD and can get sick sometimes when shifting too fast.

@ThatWriterBoi (Is Shadow Shift an Insta-KO? If not, he's good.)

CrimsonNinja said:

ThatWriterBoi said: Name: Akira Naeson
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Omnisexual
Polyamory Open: No
Powers: Barrier
Powers Info: Akira is capable of creating defensive barriers and can use them as force fields and makeshift traps thanks to his ability, Barrier. His barriers also can also inflict damage by reflecting attacks onto the attacker, Shrinking, Or Enlarging They Are Both Possible For This Quirk. He Can Even Phase Through Them, It Takes Someone With The Power and Speed Stats of 4 Just To Break It. When The Barrier Is Broken, User Will Feel Intense Pain In His Ribs, Almost As If They Have Broken(All Of Them), The Pain Goes Away After A Few Seconds, But He Will Is Left With A Bad Headache, Making It Harder For Him To Move And Fight
Background: The brother of Takirah, and on his mother's side of the family and not his father, he normally leaded Takirah despite being younger.
Weapon(s): None
Fighting Style: Kickboxing and Taekwondo
Brains: 5/5
Power: 5/5
Speed: 3/5
Weight Class: Between Light and Middle
Weakness: Said it already.

@ThatWriterBoi (The weakness makes sense, but we use the stats to takes down shields, not pounds. Also, some of the things in the power section don't make sense for a barrier.)

Oh sorry, it's just, he can manipulate how he makes his barrier, thats all. Tell me what's wrong with it though.)

ThatWriterBoi said:

CrimsonNinja said:

ThatWriterBoi said: Name: Akira Naeson
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Omnisexual
Polyamory Open: No
Powers: Barrier
Powers Info: Akira is capable of creating defensive barriers and can use them as force fields and makeshift traps thanks to his ability, Barrier. His barriers also can also inflict damage by reflecting attacks onto the attacker, Shrinking, Or Enlarging They Are Both Possible For This Quirk. He Can Even Phase Through Them, It Takes Someone With The Power and Speed Stats of 4 Just To Break It. When The Barrier Is Broken, User Will Feel Intense Pain In His Ribs, Almost As If They Have Broken(All Of Them), The Pain Goes Away After A Few Seconds, But He Will Is Left With A Bad Headache, Making It Harder For Him To Move And Fight
Background: The brother of Takirah, and on his mother's side of the family and not his father, he normally leaded Takirah despite being younger.
Weapon(s): None
Fighting Style: Kickboxing and Taekwondo
Brains: 5/5
Power: 5/5
Speed: 3/5
Weight Class: Between Light and Middle
Weakness: Said it already.

@ThatWriterBoi (The weakness makes sense, but we use the stats to takes down shields, not pounds. Also, some of the things in the power section don't make sense for a barrier.)

Oh sorry, it's just, he can manipulate how he makes his barrier, thats all. Tell me what's wrong with it though.)

@CrimsonNinja (So there's two things I want to know.

1. What's a make-shift trap?

2. How much damage does it reflect?

CrimsonNinja said:

ThatWriterBoi said:

CrimsonNinja said:

ThatWriterBoi said: Name: Akira Naeson
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Omnisexual
Polyamory Open: No
Powers: Barrier
Powers Info: Akira is capable of creating defensive barriers and can use them as force fields and makeshift traps thanks to his ability, Barrier. His barriers also can also inflict damage by reflecting attacks onto the attacker, Shrinking, Or Enlarging They Are Both Possible For This Quirk. He Can Even Phase Through Them, It Takes Someone With The Power and Speed Stats of 4 Just To Break It. When The Barrier Is Broken, User Will Feel Intense Pain In His Ribs, Almost As If They Have Broken(All Of Them), The Pain Goes Away After A Few Seconds, But He Will Is Left With A Bad Headache, Making It Harder For Him To Move And Fight
Background: The brother of Takirah, and on his mother's side of the family and not his father, he normally leaded Takirah despite being younger.
Weapon(s): None
Fighting Style: Kickboxing and Taekwondo
Brains: 5/5
Power: 5/5
Speed: 3/5
Weight Class: Between Light and Middle
Weakness: Said it already.

@ThatWriterBoi (The weakness makes sense, but we use the stats to takes down shields, not pounds. Also, some of the things in the power section don't make sense for a barrier.)

Oh sorry, it's just, he can manipulate how he makes his barrier, thats all. Tell me what's wrong with it though.)

@CrimsonNinja (So there's two things I want to know.

1. What's a make-shift trap?

2. How much damage does it reflect?

@ThatWriterBoi

ThatWriterBoi said:

CrimsonNinja said:

ThatWriterBoi said:

CrimsonNinja said:

ThatWriterBoi said: Name: Akira Naeson
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Omnisexual
Polyamory Open: No
Powers: Barrier
Powers Info: Akira is capable of creating defensive barriers and can use them as force fields and makeshift traps thanks to his ability, Barrier. His barriers also can also inflict damage by reflecting attacks onto the attacker, Shrinking, Or Enlarging They Are Both Possible For This Quirk. He Can Even Phase Through Them, It Takes Someone With The Power and Speed Stats of 4 Just To Break It. When The Barrier Is Broken, User Will Feel Intense Pain In His Ribs, Almost As If They Have Broken(All Of Them), The Pain Goes Away After A Few Seconds, But He Will Is Left With A Bad Headache, Making It Harder For Him To Move And Fight
Background: The brother of Takirah, and on his mother's side of the family and not his father, he normally leaded Takirah despite being younger.
Weapon(s): None
Fighting Style: Kickboxing and Taekwondo
Brains: 5/5
Power: 5/5
Speed: 3/5
Weight Class: Between Light and Middle
Weakness: Said it already.

@ThatWriterBoi (The weakness makes sense, but we use the stats to takes down shields, not pounds. Also, some of the things in the power section don't make sense for a barrier.)

Oh sorry, it's just, he can manipulate how he makes his barrier, thats all. Tell me what's wrong with it though.)

@CrimsonNinja (So there's two things I want to know.

1. What's a make-shift trap?

2. How much damage does it reflect?

@ThatWriterBoi

@CrimsonNinja

1. It can just also trap someone in a barrier, and they'd have to break it from the inside out, aka hurting themselves attempting to escape something.
2. About 50-65% of the user's strength each hit.

CrimsonNinja said:

ThatWriterBoi said:

CrimsonNinja said:

ThatWriterBoi said:

CrimsonNinja said:

ThatWriterBoi said: Name: Akira Naeson
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Omnisexual
Polyamory Open: No
Powers: Barrier
Powers Info: Akira is capable of creating defensive barriers and can use them as force fields and makeshift traps thanks to his ability, Barrier. His barriers also can also inflict damage by reflecting attacks onto the attacker, Shrinking, Or Enlarging They Are Both Possible For This Quirk. He Can Even Phase Through Them, It Takes Someone With The Power and Speed Stats of 4 Just To Break It. When The Barrier Is Broken, User Will Feel Intense Pain In His Ribs, Almost As If They Have Broken(All Of Them), The Pain Goes Away After A Few Seconds, But He Will Is Left With A Bad Headache, Making It Harder For Him To Move And Fight
Background: The brother of Takirah, and on his mother's side of the family and not his father, he normally leaded Takirah despite being younger.
Weapon(s): None
Fighting Style: Kickboxing and Taekwondo
Brains: 5/5
Power: 5/5
Speed: 3/5
Weight Class: Between Light and Middle
Weakness: Said it already.

@ThatWriterBoi (The weakness makes sense, but we use the stats to takes down shields, not pounds. Also, some of the things in the power section don't make sense for a barrier.)

Oh sorry, it's just, he can manipulate how he makes his barrier, thats all. Tell me what's wrong with it though.)

@CrimsonNinja (So there's two things I want to know.

1. What's a make-shift trap?

2. How much damage does it reflect?

@ThatWriterBoi

@CrimsonNinja

1. It can just also trap someone in a barrier, and they'd have to break it from the inside out, aka hurting themselves attempting to escape something.
2. About 50-65% of the user's strength each hit.

@ThatWriterBoi (Okay, he's good then.)

ThatWriterBoi said: Name: Reinhart Van Astrea
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Polyamory Open: No
Powers: Divine Protection Of The Sword Saint, Voidless Divinity, Infinite Glass Exposure
Powers Info: Divine Protection - Reinhard is able to possess any Divine Protection he wants, with no limitations. Some of the abilities granted by these Divine Protections include being stronger during certain times and weather conditions, mastery of all weapons and fighting styles, and the ability to see hits before they are done.
Voidless Divinity- A short-ranged attack, allowing the user to slice his enemy to shreds, each hit is equalizing to the power of being pressed down into a mush no matter how big or tall.
Infinite Glass Exposure- A long-ranged attack, being an attack, the user can summon as many swords as he wants and shoot it subsonic-hypersonic speeds.
Weapon(s): The Sword Of Saints
Fighting Style: Aikido, and Swordsmanship.
Brains: 8/10
Block: 7(12 with Divine Protection)/10
Power: 10/10
Speed: 8/10
Agility: 7/10
Weight Class: Middle
Weakness: With Divine Protection, none, with VD anything faster than him can and will be able to dodge the hits with ease as he gets slower while reading a hit, IGE can be countered with anyone with telekinesis or things like that.
Quote: "Aren't you going to use that sword at your hip? Love the chance to experience its legendary sharpness first-hand."
Appearance:


CrimsonNinja said:

ThatWriterBoi said: Name: Reinhart Van Astrea
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Polyamory Open: No
Powers: Divine Protection Of The Sword Saint, Voidless Divinity, Infinite Glass Exposure
Powers Info: Divine Protection - Reinhard is able to possess any Divine Protection he wants, with no limitations. His powers are being stronger during certain times and weather conditions, but if it's raining or night, he becomes massively weak. Mastery of all weapons and most fighting styles, and the ability to see hits before they are done.
Voidless Divinity- A short-ranged attack, allowing the user to slice his enemy to shreds, each hit is equalizing to the power of being pressed down into a mush no matter how big or tall.
Infinite Glass Exposure- A long-ranged attack, being an attack, the user can summon as many swords as he wants but to a limit. And shoot it subsonic-hypersonic speeds.
Weapon(s): The Sword Of Saints
Fighting Style: Aikido, and Swordsmanship.
Brains: 8/10
Block: 7(12 with Divine Protection)/10
Power: 10/10
Speed: 8/10
Agility: 7/10
Weight Class: Middle
Weakness: With Divine Protection, none, with VD anything faster than him can and will be able to dodge the hits with ease as he gets slower while reading a hit, IGE can be countered with anyone with telekinesis or things like that.
Quote: "Aren't you going to use that sword at your hip? Love the chance to experience its legendary sharpness first-hand."
Appearance:


@ThatWriterBoi (This... ah... maybe it's too vague, but I feel he's OP. Mind you, I don't have a problem with strong characters, but...

1. Divine Protection is multiple unrelated abilities in one with no limit. And the fact that you listed the benefits and said some means that there are more that are unknown. Now, you can have it do different things, though it needs to have a limit in this case. If you look at Teresa, she needs Righteous Might stacks to activate her many abilities, which she gains by hitting people. Oh yes, Divine protection is supposed to be his main abiltity, he doesn't use the others that much as all he uses from it is the eye senses.

2. Voidless Divinity- The fact that it's a short ranged attack that hits multiple times is cool, but the problem is the power. For a reason I'll explain in story, slicing people isn't possible until after you hit them for a certain number of heath points. Though the bigger problem is that anyone, no matter how big or tall, is immediately crushed by this. If it was one strike, I could let this slide, but multiple just turns it into an automatic win move. Voidless Divinity can be multiple strikes, but usually it's too much to hurt Reinhart himself, I write alot of stories with that-


3. Infinite Glass Exposure- The only real problem is the infinite amount of swords. If there was a max number, it'd be good. It's not infinite, did I write that-?

4. I can't say that he doesn't have any weaknesses, but there are a few concerns. Voidless Divinity's weakness, you can leave as is. IGE, again, just put a limit, and it's fine. My real concern is with Divine Protection. I feel that since it has so many uses, there needs to be some sort of balancing act, if that makes sense.

I'm sorry if I'm being strict with this, but there's a main reason for this. If you look at Maki's sheet, he has Deathly Copy, which copies any ability he sees regardless of if he wants to or not. Now, he does explode if he has too many, but guess what happens when he sees Reinhard's abilities and sees them as they are now.