* UPDATE 12/25/16 ( 25/12/16 if you do date first ) *
Merry Christmas! This will be the last update for 2016! Anyways, a new cover screen and main menu screen!
* UPDATE 11/26/16 ( 26/11/16 if you do date first ) *
Some additions to when Jeannete and her family gets reunited, added some additions to the other route of L and J's, and added some additions to when Jeannete gets home after that chase.
* UPDATE 11/25/16 ( 25/11/16 if you do date first ) *
Added the credits at the near end of the description, plus I made one route of ' Inside L and J's ' and another is in the works.
* UPDATE 11/19/16 ( 19/11/16 if you do date first ) *
Realized the first scene isn't on the menu screen, so I fixed that.
* UPDATE 11/18/16 ( 18/11/16 if you do date first ) *
Wow, it's been three months ( Well, two, but still ) Life has been treating me and my helpers with so much stuff to do! Anyways, I reread a critique that one of them sent me like right when they came in, and I gotten a fix up idea, mainly for ' The Hallway ' for the both of them, also added a choice for Jely's view.
* UPDATE 7/27/16 ( 27/7/16 if you do date first ) *
Lavandulalilium36 edited some lines. All's I'm going to say. :) Oh yes! I am about to finish drawing a ' special moment ' for Jeannete's view, but I can't do that installment until I get onto my mom's chromebook, but you can view it on my dA :) Also, she ( sorry if I got the pronouns wrong ) is working on editing some lines, so expect that in the next update :)
* UPDATE 7/23/16 ( 23/7/16 if you do date first ) *
This act will be temporary, but I removed the textbox. I think it fixes the problem of barely reading the text. :) Also, Lavandulalilium36 edited a bit in two scenes, I'm not sure what two, but I want it to be a surprise for both you viewers and me XD
* UPDATE 7/7/16 *
Did the color characters if you get what I'm saying. Just to add a bit of variety to one of the colors to get the idea of what some character's colors are like :)
* UPDATE 7/2/16 ( 2/7/16 if you do date first ) *
Completed the first choices of the run. If you made either choice that isn't the taking off the amulet three times choice, they'll go into either ' another home ' or ' Inside L and J's ' there the coming soon scenes, once those two are done, a bad end is going to come. Plus, added a character that you'll learn more about later in the story, and the vampire version of Jeannete, what you all maybe wanted to see. Here you go. :) Oh yeah! I added another temporary scene which may or may not solve the length before you get to the actual story problem. Noone gave me feedback on that, but it kinda annoyed me. I know I should be focusing on the planned updates, but so that way, I don't always have to rely on ' Preview ' and when others don't have to click so fast if this isn't their first time viewing this. So just an added feature that will be temporary, once I'm done, I'll remove all the things that are temporary, so sorry if the final thing will be extremely long, but hopefully, it's work it!
* UPDATE 6/30/16 ( 30/6/16 if you do date first ) *
End-of-month update! Actually finished the correct placements of sprites, and I managed to figure out how to have Jeannete behind Jely one scene and in front of her the next. I simply put in two versions, one behind, one in front. Somehow, I didn't get confused XD
Anyways, I credit humiliationexpedition on here, Suganax on dA for all the sprites.
* UPDATE 6/27/16 ( 27/6/16 if you do date first ) *
Replaced and implemented sprites. Sprite art wasn't done by me, instead, it's by humiliationexpedition on here, Suganax on dA.
* UPDATE 6/23/16 ( 23/6/16 if you do date first ) *
New update schedule: Update at least twice a month. I noticed between the first ever update and this one, all the past months had been updated at least twice ( May had a whole lot of them ) so twice a month at least. Anyways, remember that one choose your view scene? Well, I edited the des for what to expect in both views because the des for the both of them were both unthought of and cringe worthy, so I edited them, it's not so much Jely's des, though I might as well edit her's, but it's more for Jeannete's des. The cringe for her's are real. So I fixed the both of them, unfortunately, I had to remove the 4th wall breaking, not another 4th wall fixed :( but I guess it's better to have thought but not so much humor than humor, but little to no thought at all, and plus, nearly nowhere do the 4th wall breaking fits anywhere in the plot, so it works I guess...
News on the poll: I still don't have results, but I said until the end of June, and it's approaching that deadline for it, so here's the poll link:
http://www.strawpoll.me/10277864"> http://www.strawpoll.me/10277864
If I don't get the results since I said that I'll change the storyline if I don't, then expect the next update to be a bit... inappropriate and sensitive...
Edited the lines for the updates. Stupid tablet -.-
* UPDATE 6/3/16 ( 3/6/16 if you do date first ) *
Have a updated hallway background, I got permission from the creator of the background. Background is made by Moosader on deviantART. Yeah. No ideas so far, so I'm going to be working on ' Emotionally Broken ' for now. I changed the sound for ' Jeannete's nightmare ' to something more fitting. The sound effect is made by EricMatyas on both CloudNovel and Sound Image, the website is here: www.soundimage.org.
* UPDATE 5/29/16 ( 29/5/16 if you do date first ) *
OH MY ******* GOD! FINALLY DONE WITH THE CONVERSATIONAL BAD END! The reason why I am calling it the conversational is because I have a planned bad end where there is a cutsceen, but if I get the poll results where they don't want me to change the storyline then I won't. Anyways, updated the choice for the first ever bad end because in nearly all the games/visual novel where there is a bad end, they always take you back to the menu screen, so I thought I'd be a bit unoriginal and add that option to go back to the main menu >:3. Plus, made the name of the viewer in each bad end conversation a actual character XD The good thing is my end of the school year is near, so I'll be in summer vacation, yaay! Yay for the hot weather! Yay for maybe me going to summer jam! Yay!
* UPDATE 5/28/16 ( 28/5/16 if you do date first ) *
Sorry for the lack of updates, anyways, finished dinner in Jeannete's view, *cough*Withanotherbadending*cough* So yeah, I'm going to work on the dialogue for the bad end. And then, I ran out of ideas so far.
* UPDATE 5/21/16 ( 21/5/16 if you do date first ) *
Another preview for Dinner in Jeannete's view. I forgot to mention that in the last update, but whatever. Somehow, I have more ideas for Jeannete's view than Jely's view. Also, got the more proper play button there, so that way, rather than the button covering nearly the entire screen, the screen is more shown now. Last update for tonight my time is some of ' on the run ' is done. But now, I want opinions. I plan to have another bad ending in Jeannete's view ( If you want to spoil yourselves, than PM me if you want to find out the ending, plus it's a bit sensitive, so beware ) and I plan to feature a character that I planned to be featured soon, so, the character is Jely's dad. He ***** Jely's biological mom, so, I originally planned to have him arrested. And I wasn't too sure on how you guys would want it, so I created another straw poll.
Straw poll link: http://www.strawpoll.me/10277864.
So yeah. Going to work on Dinner in Jeannete's view until I get results, and if I don't get results by the end of June, then, by default, I will change it.
* UPDATE 5/20/16 ( 20/5/16 if you do date first ) *
FOUND A WAY TO MAKE BOTH JEANNETE AND JELY CRASH INTO EACH OTHER WITHOUT. NEEDING. TO. CREATE. A. TOTALLY. DIFFERENT SPRITE!!!!!! Anyways, I sorta need like a ' special scene ' picture where it's like an important event. Now I going to ATTEMPT to delete my post from the ' support ' page and then, go to bed :) Anyways, added some sprites in Jeannete's view. I need Hector sprites and the teacher sprite in order for me to start implementing sprites in the classrooms, and plus, I also need to have councilor's sprite. Yeah, I have a LOT of character designs to do :). And I also need to do both families, so, yeah, my life is a mess right now. At least I can sorta do it on my own in August if my grandma has enough money to buy me a computer. So, look forwards to that. :)
* UPDATE 5/15/16 ( 15/5/16 if you do date first ) *
HOPEFULLY, the cover works :) and a main menu now! But, the play isn't really professional quality, so, unless I can get someone to make a miniature and more professional ' Play ' you will sorta need to wait until MAYBE August for a fixed play button. Just noticed and fixed a bug where not clicking the ' play ' button will automatically go to intro. Added a faded white textbox. Thank you iluminu for allowing everyone to use this. However, on certain texts, my text is way off the textbox limits, so maybe extend the textboxes. Plus, FINALLY added backgrounds and a tiny bit of sprites. Not too much though. Thank you background creators for letting the users use them. :)
* UPDATE 5/14/16 ( 14/5/16 if you do date first ) *
Finished with ' Awoken ' but I realized that I need ANOTHER Jeannete's nightmare and ANOTHER Awoken in order to keep both the main storyline and the side storyline flowing. I'll do that later I think, and then, oh yes, by the way, L and J's Diner is a reference to a place where I live called ' J and J's Diner ' I had no other name to think of other than ' McDanny ' which is a reference to McDalod or some name like that or ' Hotdog King ' which is a reference to Burger King. And what I meant by the 110 degrees thing is that it's the usual temperature in the summer, not year round. And I just realized that the ' Awoken ' has the first Jeannete's view choices since I finished Jeannete's lunch. I just realized that I actually did not do the page number for the ' Run out ' choice XD Stupid me
* UPDATE 5/13/16 ( 13/5/16 if you do date first ) *
I seriously couldn't think of anything for Jely's view, so to cover that up, Yandere!Jeannete makes an appearance again! It kinda spoils an idea I have for an ending, but, I won't go into too much detail. That means that maybe sometime tomorrow or Sunday, I'm going to complete the ' Awoken ' scene, and then, I practically ran out of ideas, so after the next update, I need ideas, so that means no updates after the next for a little while. So yeah... Sorry for unfortunate news, it's just, school, the good thing is that summer vacation is near, the bad thing is that I may or may not go to a summer jam, which will take away my ideas and will make me focus more on the hot weather because where I am, it can reach like 110 or somewhere like that degrees, and I HATE the hot weather, so yeah.
* UPDATE 5/8/16 ( 8/5/16 if you do date first ) *
Added music, a demo of Jely's view of home if you don't get into trouble, and this is the last update, why? Check my newest dA journal as to why.
Music by:
http://www.bensound.com/* UPDATE 5/5/16 *
Finished with Jeannete's nightmare. I need ideas of what happens if Jely gets home, but not be in trouble. Either that or I'm too lazy.
* UPDATE 5/4/16 ( 4/5/16 if you do date first ) *
Screw going to bed for no reason. I'm going to bed once I need to charge my tablet :) Anyways, finished with Jely's home if you do talk back.
* UPDATE 5/3/16 ( 3/5/16 if you do date first ) *
I'm sorry going to school today because my grandma is too lazy to walk me and she doesn't trust me being by myself, so might as well use it to my advantage, right? Anyways, a demo of Jely's view of her home. In the next update, I'll either work on if she doesn't get into trouble or continue working on Jeannete's nightmare, and yes, in Jeannete's view, she has a nightmare, so a demo of that to. :)
* UPDATE 5/1/16 ( 1/5/16 if you do date first ) *
Copied the bus scene on Jely's view, this one is for the talk back choice. I'm positive that I'm either going to add the two characters that I talked about like an update or two ago or add another scene in Jeannete's view. I might create a straw pool for this one.
* UPDATE 4/26/16 ( 26/4/16 if you do date first ) *
This is temporary, but in Jely's view, added a Testing thing, so yeah, also, put up another straw poll (
http://www.strawpoll.me/10059167 ) Sorry, not the exact update that I WAS planning, but better than nothing right?
* UPDATE 4/25/16 ( 25/4/16 if you do date first ) *
Alright, I know I said that my update schedule will either be on evey weekend or every three days, but I'm still not sure the update schedule, so for now, this will be updated on a random day because remember, I have school, which means homework, so yeah. Anyways, for Jely's view, I made a quick other scene which is like, Jely's way of getting home. This scene works for both paths, which is the talk back path and the keep quiet path, so I gotta find a way to make that happen without creating another one which is exactly like that, otherwise, I'll have to create ANOTHER straw poll to see rather you guys want me to create another scene just like that one or remove the entire scene together. But that's a last resort plan, so this will not happen IF I find a way. And plus, I presented not one, but TWO new characters, and I'll probably present two MORE in the next update.
* UPDATE 4/24/16 ( 24/4/16 if you do date first *
Finished the second version of Jeannete's home. It's shorter then the storyline version, but that was because I was lazy :) Also, added some of the Jely's trust and Jeannete's Sanity in
* UPDATE 4/16/16 ( 16/4/16 if you do date first ) *
More of the demo of, you know what. Also, added some background info that I didn't mention in the kind of the main storyline ( Which is doing nearly everything with Jely ) So yeah... I think my update schedule is either every weekend, or every three days that I update this.
* UPDATE 4/13/16 ( 13/4/16 if you do date first ) *
More of the demo for Jeannete's view of home if you don't get into a fight with Kenna. Also removed the 4th wall breaking at that scene, sorry ):... But! I plan that after I finished with all of the endings, all the choices, and all the sprites and stuff like that that, that I'm going to add what I call ' Bloopers ' which is basically 4th wall breaking things, so if I can remember what I typed in that, then I can added that to the bloopers, so look forward to that :)
* UPDATE 4/12/16 ( 12/4/16 if you do date first ) *
Demo of Jeannete's home if you don't get into a fight with Kenna. Also added 4th wall breaking XD ( I seriously need to update this and let my tablet charge, it's at 13% now! )
* UPDATE 4/9/16 ( 9/4/16 if you do date first ) *
Finished Jely's view of lunch time. Now, I have to do all of the side story choices for the hallway and the counculer's, then I'll do Jeannete's view of home, and if I don't get the poll results in, then Jely's step-parent is a female okay? Okay. Also added a bit of a summary in the bottom of all of the past updates. And plus, finished all of the side story line choices for all of Jely's view, and the one * N/A yet * choices for Jeannete's view, all I need to do now is to finish the rest of the choices for Jeannete's view, then expect Jeannete's view of home to be in a work in progress for choices if there can be any, then home if you didn't choose to talk back or get into a fight with Kenna. FINISHED.WITH.THE.CHOICES.FOR.COUNCULER'S.IN.JEANNETE'S.VIEW!!!!! Finally, *cough**cough*Andyoualsogetabadendingifyoudocertainchoices*cough**cough* Also noticed that I didn't make the Apologize choice go into it's proper ending page, even though both choices goes to the same ending page. I really AM an idiot. I forgot to remove the N/A yet on the starting into space option on Jeannete's view of the counculer's. I'm really AM an idiot. Sorry for such HUGE updates in one day, and an additional update at 11:06 PM my time, finished Jeannete's view of home, all I need is to think up of a snerio ( I'm sorry I can't spell right now ) for when she doesn't have a fight with Kenna
* UPDATE 4/8/16 ( 8/4/16 if you do date first ) *
Demo of Jely's view of lunch
* UPDATE 4/6/16 ( 6/4/16 if you do date first )
Finished with Jeannete's view of lunch. Now, I need time to work on Jely's view, then all of the side choices in the hallway, and Councillor's, then I SHOULD be ready to work on homes in Jeannete and Jely's view, working on Jeannete's view first, then by then, I SHOULD get the poll results for what gender Jely's step-parent is.
* UPDATE 4/3/16 ( 3/4/16 if you do date first ) *
FINALLY! I fixed the fact that the ' Keep Quiet ' path gone to the wrong scene. The only way for that to happen is to repeat some of the ' Talk back ' dialogue into the ' Keep Quiet ' dialogue. Hopefully it worked, because since I found out about this problem, I tried two times to fix it, so hopefully, no one can ever encounter this problem again :) .
* UPDATE 4/2/16 ( 2/4/16 if you do date first )*
Finished the main story line for Jely's view for the counculer's, which means I need a poll, why? Well, Jely's mom was ***** ( Censored due to sensitive material ) and Jely's mom is bisexual, so I created a straw poll for you guys to decide what gender Jely's step-parent should be. Anyways, and I added a scene where you chose rather you want to see how you can help or not. Here is the straw poll:
http://strawpoll.me/7264010, I'll also post a status update for my dA watchers to decide ( Yes I have a dA )
*Cough* IhopethatCloudNovelcansupportsuchahudgeupdate *cough*
* UPDATE 3/27/16 ( 27/3/16 if you do date first )*
EASTER UPDATE! Anyways, kind of finished the main storyline for when both are in the counculer's in Jeannete's view. And sort of new sceen. Next, I'll be working on Jely's view of the conculer's, and then, lunch time with one of them getting in trouble. And finally, more story choices which will affect the sanity of Jeannete and the trust of Jely. ( Hopefully, Cloud Novel will allow such a hudge update and planning pharagrah ) and I fixed the date, this year, Easter is on the 27th, not the 29th XD
* UPDATE 3/18/16 ( 18/3/16 if you do date first )*
Cloud novel is not cooperating with me. Anyways, new cover, and a preview of Jeannete's view of the councilor's
* UPDATE 2/20/16 ( 20/2/16 if you do date first )*
Added a new character, made a ' Jely's Trust ' and ' Jeannete's Sanity ', and made the ' Talk back ' choice go to the proper page ( Man, out of all of the scenes, class in Jely's view was the hardest for me XD )
* UPDATE 2/19/16 ( 19/2/16 if you do date first ) *
Made the ' Talk Back ' choice go to it's proper page
* UPDATE 2/18/16 ( 18/2/16 if you do date first ) *
Added Choices, removed most of the * N/A Yet *, make the ' Keep Quiet ' choice go to it's proper page, made the ' Keep Quiet ' path go to it's proper scene and added a voluenteer sence
* UPDATE 2/12/16 ( 12/2/16 if you do date first ) *
Added ' The Hallway ' in both of their views, plus fixed some spelling mistakes
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Now even though at first glance this isn't Yuri, it does contain SOME elements of Yuri. Warning: Even though it's censored, it dose include some strong language and sensitive material.
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Forbidden Love is about two girls, Jely and Jeannete, who are facing everyday school problems, for an example, bullies, but, one of them has a secret and doesn't want the other to find out until way later, when they both know each other so well, that it'll surprise the other. You, the viewer, can control the story, and how much they love each other rather in a friendship way, or in a lover way.
If you want to volunteer to put sprites, then here is my dA gallery:
http://mr-shipping-trash.deviantart.com/gallery/57672000/Forbidden-Love-things------------------------------------------------------------
