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"After all" - UT fangame. [DEMO]

PostPosted: Tue Nov 22, 2016 1:10 pm
by Azzai
Fangame Undertale. Original by Toby Fox.

This is only a demo version of our game. It covers only the first day, which is Monday. Of course, it does not include all of the options available at this level of the game, because we wanted to keep some surprises ;)

Undertale by Toby Fox
Music by Toby Fox
Backgrounds are screenshots from Undertale
Screenplay by Taharaki (Azzai)
Translation by JustKleoArts
Projects characters to JustKleoArts with Taharaki (Azzai)

check out our pages!
JustKleoArts: http://justkleoarts.deviantart.com/
Taharaki (Azzai): http://taharaki.deviantart.com/

Re: "After all" - UT fangame. [DEMO]

PostPosted: Wed Nov 23, 2016 6:07 pm
by Sonya
Hey, this is the best Undertale Fan visual novel on the site, so I'll be featuring it on the front page. It needs more views. Art is gorgeous.

Re: "After all" - UT fangame. [DEMO]

PostPosted: Wed Nov 23, 2016 10:35 pm
by smolfedora27
Hey there! I checked out the whole demo, and it's really cool! You are a very talented artist, and the idea is really cute. However, I noticed your grammar was, a little less than average. I'm not trying to be mean or anything, I was just wondering if I could help edit. I'm pretty good at English, and I think it would make the novel better if it was easier to read and understand. I hope you don't mind, but if you don't want my help, I understand. Best of luck to you, and I can't wait to see your finished product :)

Re: "After all" - UT fangame. [DEMO]

PostPosted: Sat Nov 26, 2016 4:11 pm
by Ruki
This novel is really cool! I love the art and story! Looking forward to your final project! :whee:

Re: "After all" - UT fangame. [DEMO]

PostPosted: Sat Nov 26, 2016 4:24 pm
by ThayBrownie
I know more or less what Undertale is. But haven't played it. Anyway, I loved the art and the storyline is pretty well done. Hope it will be finished soon. ;)

Re: "After all" - UT fangame. [DEMO]

PostPosted: Mon Dec 12, 2016 3:16 am
by Firelilygaming
I look forward to the rest!

Re: "After all" - UT fangame. [DEMO]

PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2016 11:05 pm
by Greybugz
IM SO MAD ITS OVER I WANT MORE ITS SO GOOD GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil:

Re: "After all" - UT fangame. [DEMO]

PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2016 11:05 pm
by Greybugz
IM SO MAD ITS OVER I WANT MORE ITS SO GOOD GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil:

Re: "After all" - UT fangame. [DEMO]

PostPosted: Sun Dec 18, 2016 12:16 pm
by kidwreckage
the novel is really well made, though the spelling and grammar could use a little work. just a bit of constructive criticism. :)

Good!

PostPosted: Sat Dec 31, 2016 3:33 am
by AkisaAkaru
Really like it. :3 Can't wait for the full one. :D :D :D :D