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Otometaku

Life ✿ On!

by Otometaku | Last Updated: April 27, 2017

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April 27, 2017, 5:30 pmSquashed some bugs.

April 26, 2017, 8:41 amFixed Bug

April 25, 2017, 9:37 pmnew stage for the cheat code quiz! (don't forget to save so you don't lose your progress!)

April 25, 2017, 9:36 pmNo message

April 24, 2017, 9:18 pmNo message

April 24, 2017, 7:18 pmCorrected some errors in the game! And made the attributes less confusing.

April 23, 2017, 4:49 pmNo message

April 23, 2017, 1:34 pmNo message

April 23, 2017, 1:29 pmNo message

April 23, 2017, 12:54 pmNo message

April 23, 2017, 12:31 pmCHAPTER ONE IS OUT OMG OMG OMG!!! And also the loading issue is gone, too.

April 23, 2017, 12:30 pmCHAPTER ONE IS OUT OMG OMG OMG!!!!

April 20, 2017, 5:12 pmNo message

April 19, 2017, 3:50 pmYou should be able to load things better now. I modified some of the scenes.

April 18, 2017, 5:28 pmNo message

April 18, 2017, 9:47 amNo message

April 18, 2017, 9:45 amMinor Update: As promised, the character info chart is now available and running. You would be able to interact with those characters on that page later on.

April 16, 2017, 1:02 pmNo message

April 16, 2017, 12:49 pmCheat Code QUIZ is now UP! Second Blooper scene added.

April 15, 2017, 7:39 pmFixed the attributes. Now you can see it and access it throughout the game. Also fixed some minor bugs. (If you notice any bugs or issues with the VN, feel free to PM me. ^~^)

April 15, 2017, 2:20 pmNo message

April 15, 2017, 10:18 amAdded a Blooper Scene! Check it out under the "Extras" tab in the menu!

April 15, 2017, 10:18 amAdded a Blooper Scene! Check it out in the "Extras" tab in the menu!

April 14, 2017, 7:29 pmFIxed some bugs.

April 14, 2017, 7:12 pmFixed Summary: Apparently HTML Codes don't work on them xD

April 14, 2017, 7:10 pmFixed Summary: Apparently HTML Codes don't work on them xD

April 14, 2017, 6:42 pmReleased

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ZodiacStories April 17, 2017

uniimii April 16, 2017

NaSetsu April 15, 2017

emilyp8753 April 14, 2017


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April 14, 2017

[~✿ IMPORTANT ✿~]
You should be able to play [Stage 2: Character Roleplay!] in the "Cheat Code Quiz" section. (Some extra story scenes in there as well)

Also, Chapter 1 is OUT!

[~✿ Next Update: NEXT SUNDAY ✿~]
[Now available:] CHAPTER ONE, Prologue, Cheat Code Quiz (2 stages), Character information, Credits, Bloopers (in "Extra")

[~✿ Summary ✿~]
Going to a new school is tough?
Try Lyn, a normal girl tossed into the messed up upper classed Society and Hershvard Academy, the famous institute for rich sons and daughters of the higher class.

With her struggling relationship with her boyfriend, an arranged marriage with the worst guy possible, and a crazy theater teacher trying to meddle with her love life, can Lyn face life head on?

Life, you've officially chose the wrong person to mess with.
Oh life, it's on!

~✿~✿~✿~✿~
Dedicated to 99.99% of the population, for our messed up lives and the inhumane ability to sort them out in the end.

Rating: 5/5.00

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Re: Life ✿ On!

Postby fluffness » Fri Apr 21, 2017 1:19 am

Otometaku wrote:
fluffness wrote:wow everything is great! i love that menu page haha i couldn't find the button at first, but it's very cute. art is awsome too, the color is very well blend. i personally don't enjoy depressing stories, but the quality looks really good so i'll be looking forward to it

Thank you :wub: :wub: :wub: And yeah, the menu is a bit confusing, I'll probably add instructions on it. Haha.

The story isn't meant to be depressing, it's more of a coming of age story. My apologies if I confused you with the music and the depressing monologue in the beginning. After the introduction scene before the menu, it's pretty much light spirited all the way. (I dislike depressing stories too. Anime, manga, VNs with a sad ending or a gloomy protagonist isn't really my style. :sweat:)

Lol actually, regarding the art, I just did the lineart and the base colors. The shading and all those amazing blend things are done by my friend thornback. Her shading skills are amazing. (I want them. T^T)

Oh, that's good to hear. I'll be waiting for next update :D
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Re: Life ✿ On!

Postby Otometaku » Thu Apr 20, 2017 7:02 pm

fluffness wrote:wow everything is great! i love that menu page haha i couldn't find the button at first, but it's very cute. art is awsome too, the color is very well blend. i personally don't enjoy depressing stories, but the quality looks really good so i'll be looking forward to it

Thank you :wub: :wub: :wub: And yeah, the menu is a bit confusing, I'll probably add instructions on it. Haha.

The story isn't meant to be depressing, it's more of a coming of age story. My apologies if I confused you with the music and the depressing monologue in the beginning. After the introduction scene before the menu, it's pretty much light spirited all the way. (I dislike depressing stories too. Anime, manga, VNs with a sad ending or a gloomy protagonist isn't really my style. :sweat:)

Lol actually, regarding the art, I just did the lineart and the base colors. The shading and all those amazing blend things are done by my friend thornback. Her shading skills are amazing. (I want them. T^T)
Life On!

Life is messing with her.
She messes right back ;)

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Re: Life ✿ On!

Postby fluffness » Thu Apr 20, 2017 1:13 pm

wow everything is great! i love that menu page haha i couldn't find the button at first, but it's very cute. art is awsome too, the color is very well blend. i personally don't enjoy depressing stories, but the quality looks really good so i'll be looking forward to it
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Thank you!

Postby Otometaku » Tue Apr 18, 2017 6:18 pm

Whoa. 630 views in 4 days?! I'm shocked.

Just updated the VN today at school. Again, this is a minor update. You can now view the character's details under "Characters" in the menu. The character and player interaction page is still a W.I.P though.

The NEW Chapter is coming out in FIVE DAYS!!!! :shock:
Lol, just need to finish one more scene and it's done. :lol: :lol: :lol: I am so fast! (Just kidding.)

Really. Thank you all for your support. My characters and I hope you can drop by this Sunday again, when the new chapter is released!

~~~
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Re: Life ✿ On!

Postby Otometaku » Mon Apr 17, 2017 9:50 am

uniimii wrote:This game is super good by far! The story transitions nicely and the characters are great. The art style is also very unique, but simple at the same time. Favorited! :D

Thank you! ^~^
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Re: Life ✿ On!

Postby uniimii » Sun Apr 16, 2017 7:57 pm

This game is super good by far! The story transitions nicely and the characters are great. The art style is also very unique, but simple at the same time. Favorited! :D
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Re: Life ✿ On!

Postby NaSetsu » Sat Apr 15, 2017 6:41 pm

Otometaku wrote:
NaSetsu wrote:The game works nicely and your art is amazing, I hope one day I can draw like that. Story plot was also nicely put together can't wait for the next update.

Aww. Thank you. I'm glad you enjoy the game so far. :whee:

I actually drew the sprites a while ago with my friend in China. (She's the one with the killer coloring and shading skills, I just do the line art xP)

I'm sure you'll become a wayy better artist and writer than me. Your stories are really well done, too. Though it's not up to me, I feel like you should totally continue We thought it was Alice in Wonderland. The animation in that is pretty neat, did you use key frame or something?


Actually yes I experimented a lot with how to use different features in my old Visual Novel ~Wont you love me~ Originally supposed to be a yandere Visual Novel but now that I've gotten better at learning how everything works I'm now working on another Yandere Visual Novel. As well as a soon to be commercial project, I prefer to use Cloud novel for all of my visual novels because it's so easy to use so hopefully we both get better at making Visual Novels and become better and better!
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Re: Life ✿ On!

Postby Otometaku » Sat Apr 15, 2017 4:43 pm

NaSetsu wrote:The game works nicely and your art is amazing, I hope one day I can draw like that. Story plot was also nicely put together can't wait for the next update.

Aww. Thank you. I'm glad you enjoy the game so far. :whee:

I actually drew the sprites a while ago with my friend in China. (She's the one with the killer coloring and shading skills, I just do the line art xP)

I'm sure you'll become a wayy better artist and writer. Your stories are really well done, too. Though it's not up to me, I feel like you should totally continue We thought it was Alice in Wonderland. The animation in that is pretty neat, did you use key frame or something?
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Re: Life ✿ On!

Postby NaSetsu » Sat Apr 15, 2017 4:30 pm

The game works nicely and your art is amazing, I hope one day I can draw like that. Story plot was also nicely put together can't wait for the next update.
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Re: Life ✿ On!

Postby Otometaku » Sat Apr 15, 2017 4:17 pm

NaSetsu wrote:
Otometaku wrote:
NaSetsu wrote:I can't click the bloopers button..

Oh whoops, I forgot to update the link to the Bloopers scene. xD

There's no actual bloopers button. The Credits and Bloopers should be available as a choice inside the "Extra" section. The link should work now when you click the "Bloopers" choice when selecting the item you would like to view.


The bloopers button keeps going to the credits is it supposed to do that?

It works for me and my friend when she was testing it.

Did you click the bloopers button itself, or did you accidentally hit the background when you are clicking the options? If you accidentally clicked the background, it'll move on to the credits.

I disabled that function now, so there shouldn't be any issue even if you click the background. But that could very well be the case before.
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