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Otometaku

Life ✿ On! {Ch. 4}

by Otometaku | Last Updated: June 12, 2017

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Updates

June 12, 2017, 8:40 amFixed bug

June 11, 2017, 9:25 pmAdded an bonus sidestory. (You can see it under "Extras") Also fixed bug for Grant.

June 10, 2017, 10:10 amMade previous chapter dialogue run smoother together (for the newcomers)

June 8, 2017, 7:18 amBug in mini game fixed

June 8, 2017, 7:16 amBug found in the minigame

June 7, 2017, 9:38 pmChapter 4 new branch is FINALLY OUT! (My apologies for being late. The fever died down but I still have a major headache, Sarcastic Editor is gone, and life essentially sucked this week.)

May 29, 2017, 12:31 pmChapter 4 BUG FIxed. Turns out there's a SECOND bug because I deleted some attributes. So, the screen will no longer be stuck and you can play chapter 4 FOR REAL. (DIeeeeee Bugggsssss!!!)

May 29, 2017, 10:46 amAdded music BG for both routes. (<- Kinda forgot, then I played it and I was like "whooops?")

May 29, 2017, 10:35 amFIXED BUG. Sorry if you couldn't play life on chapter 4 before, you can now. Whoops.

May 29, 2017, 10:32 amNo message

May 29, 2017, 10:31 amAnother route done! (*Go into the woods*)

May 28, 2017, 10:37 pmDid some script changes.

May 28, 2017, 5:36 pmNo message

May 28, 2017, 5:26 pmChapter 4 is out! Though not all routes are finished! I'm working on it. (NOTE: Please vote for your opinion in the VN so far! The link is in the descriptions.)

May 25, 2017, 2:10 pmYou can view the numerical and bars attribute at the end of every chapter now (^w^) Also, just took away the "you-must-read-the-prologue" thing since it may have some issues.

May 23, 2017, 2:25 pm[Blooper 4: Bias] is out! To avoid spoilers, I also added features so you can't access the bloopers or the quiz unless you finished the prologue. If it doesn't work, trying try skipping the story up till the prologue? (Any really annoying issues, please PM me and I'll take a look.)

May 21, 2017, 7:13 pmHey y'all. Sarcastic Editor here. I corrected Otometaku's interpreted personality of me during the Q&A and added a few things here and there. (Don't tell Otometaku, haha)

May 21, 2017, 2:13 pmAhhh Elliot has red eyes! (<- Just fixed that. Sorry lol)

May 21, 2017, 1:59 pmQ&A session is out! See the train station under "Menu"

May 20, 2017, 3:26 pm(Fixed Bug at the announcements)

May 20, 2017, 3:06 pm[Important] Please read announcement at the beginning of the novel. Again, I'm sorry.

May 14, 2017, 5:18 pmAdded to the Credits (Whoops almost forgot)

May 13, 2017, 9:02 pmFIxed Bugs

May 13, 2017, 5:44 pmNo message

May 13, 2017, 10:47 amNo message

May 13, 2017, 10:01 amNo message

May 13, 2017, 12:11 amOMG This is 10 minutes late released. My computer was lagging I am sooo sorry. Chapter 3 is out!

May 8, 2017, 7:00 pmAdded attribute screen after Chapter 2.

May 7, 2017, 9:44 pmAdded a "skip intro" button. No more menu problems for second timers!

May 7, 2017, 9:33 amNo message

May 6, 2017, 8:49 pmNo message

May 6, 2017, 8:37 pmThe attribute and loading bug is FIXED! Now you can load all the flags awesomely! (Shout out to Sonya and Samonsea for the help!)

May 3, 2017, 7:22 amFixed bug on Cheat Code quiz

May 2, 2017, 9:39 pmFinished and fine tuned chapter 2. You should be able to access the next scene after Elliot and Lyn got in trouble and the bonus scene at the end of the VN. Don't forget to save!

May 1, 2017, 8:06 pmFixed some minor CG bugs.

May 1, 2017, 7:40 pmChapter 2 is out (FOR REAL). I stayed up late all weekend to finish it because my scene map was messed up it's released late ;-; ANYWAYS CHECK IT OUT!!!! ^^

May 1, 2017, 12:14 pmThere are currently bugs for displaying the attributes. (Don't worry, you still have the correct attributes, it's just not showing them right on the "attribute scenes".) Trying to fix them. I added a warning in the beginning of the novel informing the players about the issue.

April 30, 2017, 6:34 pmFixed the Cheat Code Quiz bug.

April 30, 2017, 11:39 amOption icons are back. Just realized they were missing, so whoops.

April 30, 2017, 11:32 amNEW CHAPTER!!!! O_O (Took so long lol)

April 30, 2017, 11:31 amNo message

April 29, 2017, 9:47 pmNEW GUI! (They're way better but took a bit longer to perfect.) Also, sacrificed the fancy music at the start so it can load better. If it doesn't load, I should just go ahead and kms

April 29, 2017, 6:20 pmYay! Varied the music, so now it isn't just the same soundtrack throughout the novel. ^^

April 29, 2017, 4:19 pmAdded a CG in Ryan's scene.

April 27, 2017, 5:30 pmSquashed some bugs.

April 26, 2017, 8:41 amFixed Bug

April 25, 2017, 9:37 pmnew stage for the cheat code quiz! (don't forget to save so you don't lose your progress!)

April 25, 2017, 9:36 pmNo message

April 24, 2017, 9:18 pmNo message

April 24, 2017, 7:18 pmCorrected some errors in the game! And made the attributes less confusing.

April 23, 2017, 4:49 pmNo message

April 23, 2017, 1:34 pmNo message

April 23, 2017, 1:29 pmNo message

April 23, 2017, 12:54 pmNo message

April 23, 2017, 12:31 pmCHAPTER ONE IS OUT OMG OMG OMG!!! And also the loading issue is gone, too.

April 23, 2017, 12:30 pmCHAPTER ONE IS OUT OMG OMG OMG!!!!

April 20, 2017, 5:12 pmNo message

April 19, 2017, 3:50 pmYou should be able to load things better now. I modified some of the scenes.

April 18, 2017, 5:28 pmNo message

April 18, 2017, 9:47 amNo message

April 18, 2017, 9:45 amMinor Update: As promised, the character info chart is now available and running. You would be able to interact with those characters on that page later on.

April 16, 2017, 1:02 pmNo message

April 16, 2017, 12:49 pmCheat Code QUIZ is now UP! Second Blooper scene added.

April 15, 2017, 7:39 pmFixed the attributes. Now you can see it and access it throughout the game. Also fixed some minor bugs. (If you notice any bugs or issues with the VN, feel free to PM me. ^~^)

April 15, 2017, 2:20 pmNo message

April 15, 2017, 10:18 amAdded a Blooper Scene! Check it out under the "Extras" tab in the menu!

April 15, 2017, 10:18 amAdded a Blooper Scene! Check it out in the "Extras" tab in the menu!

April 14, 2017, 7:29 pmFIxed some bugs.

April 14, 2017, 7:12 pmFixed Summary: Apparently HTML Codes don't work on them xD

April 14, 2017, 7:10 pmFixed Summary: Apparently HTML Codes don't work on them xD

April 14, 2017, 6:42 pmReleased

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April 14, 2017

{~✿ IMPORTANT ✿~}
Chapter 4 is out! (3 routes done.) I have a headache, leave me alone. Jk I still love you all.

IMPORTANT: VOTE for YOUR opinion on "Life On" below: (<- So I'll know what you guys want in future updates)
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSdbnxwVeyxlW6xy8qhZSFblxBonzQQ1TEvOldbfOz5_LhdN1g/viewform

{~✿ Next Update: SUNDAY ✿~}
[Now available:] Chapter 0-4, Cheat Code Quiz (2 stages), Character information, Credits, Bloopers 1-4 (in "Extra"), Q&A

{~✿ Summary ✿~}
Going to a new school is tough?
Try Lyn, a normal girl tossed into the messed up upper classed Society and Hershvard Academy, the famous institute for rich sons and daughters of the higher class.

With her struggling relationship with her boyfriend, an arranged marriage with the worst guy possible, and a crazy theater teacher trying to meddle with her love life, can Lyn face life head on?

Life, you've officially chosen the wrong person to mess with.
Oh life, it's on!

~✿~✿~✿~✿~
Dedicated to 99.99% of the population, for our messed up lives and the inhumane ability to sort them out in the end.

~✿~✿~✿~✿~
Follow me on @doodle.chan on Instagram!

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Re: Life ✿ On!

Postby LoveYouToo » Wed Jun 14, 2017 9:27 am

YAY! I played up till Chapter 4 now. (Sorry I disappeared so long. <- Finals)
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OMGOMG Please update! I'm shipping Maxlyn and Ellyn even more now AND I can't wait to see everyone's reaction to the news the next day!! :whee: :whee: :whee:
"Why is my heart beating so fast? Why do I feel lonely when you leave me? Why are you. . . the only one causing me so much confusion?"
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Re: Life ✿ On!

Postby ged565 » Mon Jun 12, 2017 3:48 pm

Otometaku wrote:
ged565 wrote:
[Reveal] Spoiler:
Heyyyyy it's me again! The Max route was ADORABLE OMG Max is literally so cute xDDDD So I went back to check it out and, as it turns out, after the Grant route, it still doesn't take you to the attributes(of course, unless this is just a problem with my thing). I tried the Max route and it took me to the attributes after the end of chapter 4, but it doesn't do that in the Grant route. Just thought I'd let you know so you could look into it! P.S. Your Author notes are hilarious! At some point,
you need Lyn doing some fourth wall breaking and yelling at you or something HAHAHA xD, I mean, outside of bloopers and all! That'd be hilarious! I really hope you feel better, by the way!!! Take care of yourself, and life on!!!

Thank you!
[Reveal] Spoiler:
Yup for some reason the link between Grant's end and the Attributes is there but it's not following it! (GAHUHWUH! :x ) Fixed it now for my computer. You might want to check again just in case, though.

[Reveal] Spoiler:
I will probably let all the characters in Life On break some wallz at some point in the Author Notes. It's too tempting to resist. (= v =)


I'm already feeling better! The headache is gone and other than the usual (you know, allergies and all that stuff that doesn't kill you but makes you want to kill yourself), I'm fine. :whee:

~~~
Otometaku


It's all fixed now! Yay, I'm so glad you're feeling better! :D :D
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Re: Life ✿ On!

Postby Otometaku » Mon Jun 12, 2017 3:14 pm

ged565 wrote:
[Reveal] Spoiler:
Heyyyyy it's me again! The Max route was ADORABLE OMG Max is literally so cute xDDDD So I went back to check it out and, as it turns out, after the Grant route, it still doesn't take you to the attributes(of course, unless this is just a problem with my thing). I tried the Max route and it took me to the attributes after the end of chapter 4, but it doesn't do that in the Grant route. Just thought I'd let you know so you could look into it! P.S. Your Author notes are hilarious! At some point,
you need Lyn doing some fourth wall breaking and yelling at you or something HAHAHA xD, I mean, outside of bloopers and all! That'd be hilarious! I really hope you feel better, by the way!!! Take care of yourself, and life on!!!

Thank you!
[Reveal] Spoiler:
Yup for some reason the link between Grant's end and the Attributes is there but it's not following it! (GAHUHWUH! :x ) Fixed it now for my computer. You might want to check again just in case, though.

[Reveal] Spoiler:
I will probably let all the characters in Life On break some wallz at some point in the Author Notes. It's too tempting to resist. (= v =)


I'm already feeling better! The headache is gone and other than the usual (you know, allergies and all that stuff that doesn't kill you but makes you want to kill yourself), I'm fine. :whee:

~~~
Otometaku
Life On!

Life is messing with her.
She messes right back ;)

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Re: Life ✿ On!

Postby ged565 » Sun Jun 11, 2017 10:29 pm

[Reveal] Spoiler:
Heyyyyy it's me again! The Max route was ADORABLE OMG Max is literally so cute xDDDD So I went back to check it out and, as it turns out, after the Grant route, it still doesn't take you to the attributes(of course, unless this is just a problem with my thing). I tried the Max route and it took me to the attributes after the end of chapter 4, but it doesn't do that in the Grant route. Just thought I'd let you know so you could look into it! P.S. Your Author notes are hilarious! At some point,
you need Lyn doing some fourth wall breaking and yelling at you or something HAHAHA xD, I mean, outside of bloopers and all! That'd be hilarious! I really hope you feel better, by the way!!! Take care of yourself, and life on!!!
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Announcement: Jun 7th

Postby Otometaku » Thu Jun 08, 2017 12:02 am

Announcement! Update on Chapter 4!

Hey guys. Chapter 4's Max Route is out (with a mini game).

First off-- Sorry I didn't update in time. I said I'll publish it on Monday since my fever died down. (Welp then my headache got worse and Sarcastic Editor is busy studying. Not blaming her. I'm studying too. Hence the lack of sleep.) But enough excuses, I'll be on schedule this Sunday with a---

Special Chapter for the Sidecharacters in Life On! Featuring what the heck everyone else is up to all these chapters.

Secondly, I'd like to give a shoutout to Kazuna and Shogako for their awesome art in this game!!!

KYAAA~ Kazuna's CG (Lyn in the purple dress) is even more awesome than the draft (which is surprising since the draft looked like a pro), and Shogako's step grandmother sprite was gorgeous as ever (and she drew this picture below because "she was bored.) :shock: http://pre00.deviantart.net/bbfb/th/pre/f/2017/155/f/e/image_by_shogako-dbbk8b9.png
(A/N: What the heck, you guys are too good. Sits in a corner and grows mushrooms)

Lastly, thank you all that voted in the "Life On Poll!" so far. (Link in descriptions) Now I can stop worrying about which parts of Life On I should work on and what aspects are interesting. :whee: (Seriously, guessing what you guys want is too hard...)

~~~~~~~~
Thank you for playing Life On. This VN has supported me through tough times in real life. When I'm down, you guys' comments-- hilarious, earnest, encouraging, they always cheered me back up. Sure, this VN does take quite a bit out of my free time, but I think it's worth it. You are worth it.

Otometaku :wub:
Life On!

Life is messing with her.
She messes right back ;)

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Re: Life ✿ On!

Postby shogako » Thu Jun 08, 2017 12:00 am

Ohh, I'm so glad that the Grandmother sprite worked well, I was a little worried it wouldn't for some reason! :uh:
Anyway,
[Reveal] Spoiler:
AWW MAX'S ROUTE WAS SOOO CUTE. I had to guess on the code, though, but luckily I remembered there being an O in the middle of it. That's what saved me, haha. Can't wait for Elliot's, especially since I know what happens. hehehe. >:3
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Re: Life ✿ On!

Postby Kazuna » Wed Jun 07, 2017 11:51 pm

Ahhhh update!!! I'm glad you're back, hope you feel better soon.
[Reveal] Spoiler:
The Max route was seriously awesome :wub: Luckily I wrote the code down, I knew it would be needed later in the story :3

Also, the new menu background looks so pretty :D
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Re: Life ✿ On!

Postby Otometaku » Tue Jun 06, 2017 3:08 pm

ged565 wrote:Yayyy! Sorry for not saying something sooner xD
First of all, oh wait, I should put this in spoiler tag.

[Reveal] Spoiler:
GRRAAAAAAANT OH MY LORD CUTIE PIE~~~ But, before I get carried away, I need to mention that after pecking Grant on the cheek, the VN goes straight to your cute Author's Note bit at the end and skips over/doesn't have the normal "Chapter 4: End" frame that usually comes after the last scene in a chapter. This also means we don't get to view our attributes at the end of chapter 4 if we go this route. Just thought I'd let you know about that detail!

Lolol yeah. Actually you can't see the attributes if you went any route. I already fixed that. All I need to do now is to click the little "update" button on my dashboard.

Problem: I'm working on Max's route, which btw, is the longest individual route I ever wrote. I got carried away, but oh well XP

Dw about not commenting. The comment section is dead for so long bc I didn't exactly update much. THIS SHALL ALL CHANGE. (After I cram for my finals tomorrow. Yipee.)

I'm gonna update Max's route today, and fix all those issues. Thanks for giving me the heads-up!

~~~Otometaku
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Life is messing with her.
She messes right back ;)

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Re: Life ✿ On!

Postby ged565 » Tue Jun 06, 2017 1:26 pm

Yayyy! Sorry for not saying something sooner xD
First of all, oh wait, I should put this in spoiler tag.

[Reveal] Spoiler:
GRRAAAAAAANT OH MY LORD CUTIE PIE~~~ But, before I get carried away, I need to mention that after pecking Grant on the cheek, the VN goes straight to your cute Author's Note bit at the end and skips over/doesn't have the normal "Chapter 4: End" frame that usually comes after the last scene in a chapter. This also means we don't get to view our attributes at the end of chapter 4 if we go this route. Just thought I'd let you know about that detail!
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Re: Life ✿ On!

Postby Kazuna » Mon May 29, 2017 2:44 pm

Otometaku wrote:
Kazuna wrote:I'm stuck. (Otometaku: Yeah, I took out the image. Lol?)

Did you play it before or after I said I fixed the bug in the updates?

That problem should be fixed now. If not I'll take a look.

(EDIT: I just took a look. Turns out there were TWO bugs that caused it. I took out Bug#2 and tested it. It works now. <-- Unless there's another bug, in which I should just kms.)


It's fixed now~playing Ch.4 right now :3
and thanks for taking out the image I have no idea why it is so large lol
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