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fnia/fnaf SL DEMO

by Babygolden | Last Updated: December 29, 2016

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December 25, 2016, 9:13 pmadded more scenes for the baby ending

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Re: fnia/fnaf SL DEMO

Postby FNAFFAN24 » Fri Jul 07, 2017 9:30 am

the game stops loading at 96 percent
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Re: fnia/fnaf SL DEMO

Postby Babygolden » Wed Mar 22, 2017 3:07 am

I will get that done.
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Re: fnia/fnaf SL DEMO

Postby DeathV0RTEX1234 » Tue Mar 14, 2017 11:50 pm

all i see is a black screen :evil: :sweat: :uh: :uh: :uh: :uh: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :/
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Re: fnia/fnaf SL DEMO

Postby Babygolden » Tue Jan 17, 2017 3:28 am

I could help u if need help k I am can help anyone I was new to and I lern some by myself and other with my partner makkia and strom blade
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Re: fnia/fnaf SL DEMO

Postby disisawesome » Fri Jan 13, 2017 8:04 pm

How do you even shrink down the picture? I'm wondering how to do so (I'm new here). :stare:
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Re: fnia/fnaf SL DEMO

Postby Babygolden » Wed Dec 28, 2016 4:56 am

ok ok i will
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Re: fnia/fnaf SL DEMO

Postby Babygolden » Mon Dec 26, 2016 2:49 am

ok I will try I am working on to visule novels right now
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Re: fnia/fnaf SL DEMO

Postby Bowserjr55 » Mon Dec 26, 2016 1:48 am

Ok, so there are some spots where the name is combined with whatever word comes after it, and the pacing is way too quick, even for a demo. I don't know how long you've been working on this, but proper punctuation and grammar are what usually keep a story flowing, especially with visual novels. When something isn't spelled right, immersion in the story is broken because the reader has to decode whatever was being said. It's not a very difficult thing to get, especially if you ever had English in school.

Now if you're from outside the country, I could cut you a little bit of slack, but at the same time, this is poor even for that. I'm not trying to be mean here, I'm just giving my criticism on this visual novel. I understand it's a work in progress, so I hope that this helps, even a little bit.
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Re: fnia/fnaf SL DEMO

Postby Babygolden » Sat Dec 17, 2016 4:35 pm

Ok I will
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Re: fnia/fnaf SL DEMO

Postby wolfenhein » Sat Dec 17, 2016 11:16 am

shrink down the picture. I don't think most people want to see babies that big
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