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Advent

by callmedoc | Last Updated: October 3, 2017

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October 2, 2017, 2:25 pm1.1 Update is going live! Access to the Sky Temple is now available!

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September 17, 2017, 4:33 pm-Text errors corrected. -Additional out options for Ebi and Kinsie encounters. ( option to not proceed ) -Dialogue changes to adult scenes ( Nare you naughty boy, don't say such things that are crude! ) -Further updates and details will be posted to Patreon.

September 11, 2017, 11:18 amNo message

September 11, 2017, 10:09 amReleased

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September 11, 2017

Worried of growing lost in life, a young tailor named Nare must journey to the mystical city of Aton to find his clarity! It won't be that easy though...there's a world full of wild and dangerous monsters after the body and soul of humans! Help Nare discover his destiny in a world of danger and sin, or watch him give in to temptation and become lost altogether!

With cartoon illustrations and naughty writing, Advent might just be a story to charm you!

Want to help support this project? I've got a patreon. ;) https://www.patreon.com/AdventVN

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Re: Advent

by callmedoc » Tue Oct 17, 2017 6:49 pm

Ishtar wrote: What I would like to see is maybe a final piece of artwork showing his possible life with whoever he stays. Something that makes the player feel less like they did something wrong as a game over screen does. Just a thought.


Hey there Ishtar, I'm glad that you've been enjoying the visual novel so far! I'm glad you brought that up because yes, there are plans for just that! For the time being these are more just placeholders and quick reminders. There will be a re-work eventually! :) Thanks for your feedback!
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Re: Advent

by Ishtar » Tue Oct 17, 2017 1:12 pm

I really liked it. The "trying to find oneself" theme is very nicely executed with the main character. One thing I find I disliked, quite a bit actually, is that if you decide to go with one of the monsters the way it ends feels like a downer. The text makes it feel like a happy ending spoilers:
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Like going with the snek, he goes on a journey and it feels nice. Staying with the fox lady as her mate, they live together and become a family
it feels like a happy ending, but the final screen looks more like a downer game over screen kinda thing. What I would like to see is maybe a final piece of artwork showing his possible life with whoever he stays. Something that makes the player feel less like they did something wrong as a game over screen does. Just a thought.
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Re: Advent

by jacuslegrandmenedes » Sat Oct 07, 2017 9:28 pm

jacuslegrandmenedes wrote:y would have wanted to continue the adventure whit the snake companion would have been nice also im one of your fan from e621 end ech storie is wonderful y love thems all :3

oh well talked to fast for the snake still amazing ;)
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Re: Advent

by jacuslegrandmenedes » Sat Oct 07, 2017 8:57 pm

y would have wanted to continue the adventure whit the snake companion would have been nice also im one of your fan from e621 end ech storie is wonderful y love thems all :3
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Re: Advent

by DocCarrot » Mon Oct 02, 2017 5:01 pm

Very calming with the introduction of music.
You always know how to pick the best pieces.
The discovery of more knowledge about this land is quite fascinating to say the least. Thank you for giving us another bit of your project.
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Re: Advent

by callmedoc » Sun Oct 01, 2017 10:20 pm

DragonColordWTFlip wrote:I might post this to youtube would you mind if I do?


By all means, feel free to! Just a heads up however, I'll be pushing an update shortly here with some new content including actual sounds and music! :) Thanks for taking the time~
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Re: Advent

by DragonColordWTFlip » Sun Oct 01, 2017 1:22 pm

I might post this to youtube would you mind if I do?
I'm optimistic, pestimestic and a Youtuber! Come on join me! I would love your company! Image
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Re: Advent

by semineutral » Mon Sep 25, 2017 7:23 pm

Still pretty surreal to see you making this considering your adversion to "rushing" a story sexually, though yours still has a nice wait.
But hey, it's technically not instant gratification, some of us have been waiting for years!
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Re: Advent

by callmedoc » Fri Sep 22, 2017 11:48 am

Hey everybody! If you're wondering what's going on with this project right now, I recommend you follow this link! viewtopic?f=22&t=6972

You be good now~ ;)
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Re: Advent

by callmedoc » Fri Sep 15, 2017 9:51 pm

PMR55 wrote:This is amazing so far! Definitely followed on patreon,i do hope more is done with eli though,snake girls are my favorite.
I am so glad you enjoyed, and thank you for supporting the novel! ^-^ If you know anyone else who might love to give it a shot, please do share!
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