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May 26, 2016

From the maker of the FNIA Visual Novel, is a visual novel based on Mairusu's AnimeTale art.

PLEASE READ: I'm working on a big update to this game to make it way less cringey, make it more tied into the games, adding onto the routes, and making the girls slow down in their relationship.

This one is a bit more adult then the last one.

Multiple backgrounds and characters are from various artists, including Toby Fox and Mariusu.
Chara is by LadyMurderer007 on DeviantArt.
Mettaton EX and Temmie by Pushimo on DeviantArt.
Muffet by DestinytoMoon on DeviantArt.
Frisk's/Chad's flirts are from various artists and writers.

Rating: 4.39/5.00

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Re: AnimeTale (FNIA x Undertale) Visual Novel

Postby SeikaUruru » Fri Jul 22, 2016 10:39 pm

MisteriousFate wrote:
TurnerJFrost wrote:
TurnerJFrost wrote:By the way, can you explain how I can make this one and my FNIA Visual Novel better?

I'm not quite sure.... bUT I guess it isn't very eventful and isn't really story-driven. There are too much dialogue and not enough action. Frisk was the most uneventful one. The second most eventful is probably Sans, then PApyrus's then, of course, Undyne. In Undyne nothing hardly happens(I know you said you might update that route). All that happen was meeting her at the beach then a long explanation(at least to me) happened then he drowns. CPR took place, yay we got the ending. There should be events that build up to make the character like Chad. Not just them liking him right off the bat, saying that he's a nice guy and all. This is a cliche idea, but just ann example. For example, one of them got kidnapped and then he saves her, making her fall in love for his heroic side. Because they all just fell in love with him for no reason at all. No solid event took place to make them "like" him. In short, make more events that build up to something special in the end. Not just sexual things.

Okay. I just don't know what to do for them. I have to follow the characters and I think a lot of stories and ideas have already been done with them. I have more freedom and ideas with FNIA. I just wish I had some collaborator to help smooth out the plot, give ideas and help with routes.

... ... Okay. Also, the same thing kind of goes for FNIA. Some routes actually have a little character development but still, not enough. Most of what was happening were just sexual things but I guess that has to be in the center of everything because the story did state that the animatronics are... perverted. But, just a story idea, go deeper into the part about the thing about this man or something like that killing children(change the children to adults or something). I tried writing one where it's story driven from this "legend" or something... (But I stopped before I even wrote it) (Sorry... I'm not really an FNAF hardcore fan so I don't know much about it). Just an idea. Plus, the animatronics could've have built some feelings of loneliness so that's a reason why they want to do sexual things, but actually sexual things aren't what they want, they actually want love but they mistake it for sexual things, due to being in a robot's body for so long. (not sure if you were aking for a FNAF idea of Undertale one so I gave a FNAF one because I haven't gone through Undertale that much yet so I can't really think of any idea. But just maybe... here's one...) After the monsters were freed from (the place...) they all got hynotised into being aggresive towards human still. Basically, they ahave a competetion to overthrow as many humans as possible, and each route shows them trying to overthrow you. But after some events, they, in the end, were the one that got overthrow, but it all depends on your choices. For example, you got 4/10 of the choices wrong, then she overthrows you or she goes away, or soemthing happens. A way for them to overthrow you is to make them fall in love with you, so you can have their (spirit, was it? The battle sequences or something showed a heart, I forgot what it was called). But they're not really supposed to fall in love because when the monsters fall in love with a human, their (spirit) goes to the human. (They now have a stronger spitir after being exposed to the human world for a while). In order to make it so neither dies, both of the monsters and humans love meter must be leveled. NO MATTER WHAT. Or the ending will be tragic and one of the other will die. The reason why they don't die is because hwen they both love each other, their soul/spirit is replaced with the others spirit. Meaning they are bound to each other. FOR LIFE. (Now it's kind of like i'm collabing with you so if you like the idea, tell me so and i'll help. If I can.)[/quote]
1. About FNIA's story. There are no dead children (except for the 83 victim, and even then, it's not canon in normal FNIA.) If you haven't played the Purple Girl route, then skip this spoiler.
[Reveal] Spoiler:
The reason they are sexual is because the 83 victim accidentally gave them artificial souls based off of her nightmares. Her nightmares were based off of the way she died, suffocation in Fredbear's breasts. This caused the nightmares to be sexual.
There is only one animatronic that's possessed in my novel, but that's classified who. Great idea though!
2. That's an AMAZING idea for the AnimeTale novel! I'm totally gonna use that in some way! Hmm...How would you feel if I added you as a collaborator in the novels? You have great ideas! And you could help with stuff even before it's released![/quote]
Sure! I would be happy to help! (Sorry I don't know much about FNAF. Plus it seems like you've got it under control. Just need to make the route a little longer and in depth)
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Re: AnimeTale (FNIA x Undertale) Visual Novel

Postby TurnerJFrost » Fri Jul 22, 2016 10:37 pm

MisteriousFate wrote:
TurnerJFrost wrote:
TurnerJFrost wrote:By the way, can you explain how I can make this one and my FNIA Visual Novel better?

I'm not quite sure.... bUT I guess it isn't very eventful and isn't really story-driven. There are too much dialogue and not enough action. Frisk was the most uneventful one. The second most eventful is probably Sans, then PApyrus's then, of course, Undyne. In Undyne nothing hardly happens(I know you said you might update that route). All that happen was meeting her at the beach then a long explanation(at least to me) happened then he drowns. CPR took place, yay we got the ending. There should be events that build up to make the character like Chad. Not just them liking him right off the bat, saying that he's a nice guy and all. This is a cliche idea, but just ann example. For example, one of them got kidnapped and then he saves her, making her fall in love for his heroic side. Because they all just fell in love with him for no reason at all. No solid event took place to make them "like" him. In short, make more events that build up to something special in the end. Not just sexual things.

Okay. I just don't know what to do for them. I have to follow the characters and I think a lot of stories and ideas have already been done with them. I have more freedom and ideas with FNIA. I just wish I had some collaborator to help smooth out the plot, give ideas and help with routes.

... ... Okay. Also, the same thing kind of goes for FNIA. Some routes actually have a little character development but still, not enough. Most of what was happening were just sexual things but I guess that has to be in the center of everything because the story did state that the animatronics are... perverted. But, just a story idea, go deeper into the part about the thing about this man or something like that killing children(change the children to adults or something). I tried writing one where it's story driven from this "legend" or something... (But I stopped before I even wrote it) (Sorry... I'm not really an FNAF hardcore fan so I don't know much about it). Just an idea. Plus, the animatronics could've have built some feelings of loneliness so that's a reason why they want to do sexual things, but actually sexual things aren't what they want, they actually want love but they mistake it for sexual things, due to being in a robot's body for so long. (not sure if you were aking for a FNAF idea of Undertale one so I gave a FNAF one because I haven't gone through Undertale that much yet so I can't really think of any idea. But just maybe... here's one...) After the monsters were freed from (the place...) they all got hynotised into being aggresive towards human still. Basically, they ahave a competetion to overthrow as many humans as possible, and each route shows them trying to overthrow you. But after some events, they, in the end, were the one that got overthrow, but it all depends on your choices. For example, you got 4/10 of the choices wrong, then she overthrows you or she goes away, or soemthing happens. A way for them to overthrow you is to make them fall in love with you, so you can have their (spirit, was it? The battle sequences or something showed a heart, I forgot what it was called). But they're not really supposed to fall in love because when the monsters fall in love with a human, their (spirit) goes to the human. (They now have a stronger spitir after being exposed to the human world for a while). In order to make it so neither dies, both of the monsters and humans love meter must be leveled. NO MATTER WHAT. Or the ending will be tragic and one of the other will die. The reason why they don't die is because hwen they both love each other, their soul/spirit is replaced with the others spirit. Meaning they are bound to each other. FOR LIFE. (Now it's kind of like i'm collabing with you so if you like the idea, tell me so and i'll help. If I can.)[/quote]
1. About FNIA's story. There are no dead children (except for the 83 victim, and even then, it's not canon in normal FNIA.) If you haven't played the Purple Girl route, then skip this spoiler.
[Reveal] Spoiler:
The reason they are sexual is because the 83 victim accidentally gave them artificial souls based off of her nightmares. Her nightmares were based off of the way she died, suffocation in Fredbear's breasts. This caused the nightmares to be sexual.
There is only one animatronic that's possessed in my novel, but that's classified who. Great idea though!
2. That's an AMAZING idea for the AnimeTale novel! I'm totally gonna use that in some way! Hmm...How would you feel if I added you as a collaborator in the novels? You have great ideas! And you could help with stuff even before it's released!
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Re: AnimeTale (FNIA x Undertale) Visual Novel

Postby SeikaUruru » Fri Jul 22, 2016 8:46 pm

TurnerJFrost wrote:
TurnerJFrost wrote:By the way, can you explain how I can make this one and my FNIA Visual Novel better?

I'm not quite sure.... bUT I guess it isn't very eventful and isn't really story-driven. There are too much dialogue and not enough action. Frisk was the most uneventful one. The second most eventful is probably Sans, then PApyrus's then, of course, Undyne. In Undyne nothing hardly happens(I know you said you might update that route). All that happen was meeting her at the beach then a long explanation(at least to me) happened then he drowns. CPR took place, yay we got the ending. There should be events that build up to make the character like Chad. Not just them liking him right off the bat, saying that he's a nice guy and all. This is a cliche idea, but just ann example. For example, one of them got kidnapped and then he saves her, making her fall in love for his heroic side. Because they all just fell in love with him for no reason at all. No solid event took place to make them "like" him. In short, make more events that build up to something special in the end. Not just sexual things.

Okay. I just don't know what to do for them. I have to follow the characters and I think a lot of stories and ideas have already been done with them. I have more freedom and ideas with FNIA. I just wish I had some collaborator to help smooth out the plot, give ideas and help with routes.[/quote]
... ... Okay. Also, the same thing kind of goes for FNIA. Some routes actually have a little character development but still, not enough. Most of what was happening were just sexual things but I guess that has to be in the center of everything because the story did state that the animatronics are... perverted. But, just a story idea, go deeper into the part about the thing about this man or something like that killing children(change the children to adults or something). I tried writing one where it's story driven from this "legend" or something... (But I stopped before I even wrote it) (Sorry... I'm not really an FNAF hardcore fan so I don't know much about it). Just an idea. Plus, the animatronics could've have built some feelings of loneliness so that's a reason why they want to do sexual things, but actually sexual things aren't what they want, they actually want love but they mistake it for sexual things, due to being in a robot's body for so long. (not sure if you were aking for a FNAF idea of Undertale one so I gave a FNAF one because I haven't gone through Undertale that much yet so I can't really think of any idea. But just maybe... here's one...) After the monsters were freed from (the place...) they all got hynotised into being aggresive towards human still. Basically, they ahave a competetion to overthrow as many humans as possible, and each route shows them trying to overthrow you. But after some events, they, in the end, were the one that got overthrow, but it all depends on your choices. For example, you got 4/10 of the choices wrong, then she overthrows you or she goes away, or soemthing happens. A way for them to overthrow you is to make them fall in love with you, so you can have their (spirit, was it? The battle sequences or something showed a heart, I forgot what it was called). But they're not really supposed to fall in love because when the monsters fall in love with a human, their (spirit) goes to the human. (They now have a stronger spitir after being exposed to the human world for a while). In order to make it so neither dies, both of the monsters and humans love meter must be leveled. NO MATTER WHAT. Or the ending will be tragic and one of the other will die. The reason why they don't die is because hwen they both love each other, their soul/spirit is replaced with the others spirit. Meaning they are bound to each other. FOR LIFE. (Now it's kind of like i'm collabing with you so if you like the idea, tell me so and i'll help. If I can.)
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a chance of beating you on the 101th time, I'll challenge you again and again."

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Re: AnimeTale (FNIA x Undertale) Visual Novel

Postby TurnerJFrost » Fri Jul 22, 2016 8:13 pm

TurnerJFrost wrote:By the way, can you explain how I can make this one and my FNIA Visual Novel better?

I'm not quite sure.... bUT I guess it isn't very eventful and isn't really story-driven. There are too much dialogue and not enough action. Frisk was the most uneventful one. The second most eventful is probably Sans, then PApyrus's then, of course, Undyne. In Undyne nothing hardly happens(I know you said you might update that route). All that happen was meeting her at the beach then a long explanation(at least to me) happened then he drowns. CPR took place, yay we got the ending. There should be events that build up to make the character like Chad. Not just them liking him right off the bat, saying that he's a nice guy and all. This is a cliche idea, but just ann example. For example, one of them got kidnapped and then he saves her, making her fall in love for his heroic side. Because they all just fell in love for him for no reason at all. No solid event took place to make them "like" him. In short, make more events that build up to something special in the end. Not just sexual things.[/quote]
Okay. I just don't know what to do for them. I have to follow the characters and I think a lot of stories and ideas have already been done with them. I have more freedom and ideas with FNIA. I just wish I had some collaborator to help smooth out the plot, give ideas and help with routes.
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Re: AnimeTale (FNIA x Undertale) Visual Novel

Postby SeikaUruru » Fri Jul 22, 2016 7:40 pm

MisteriousFate wrote:
TurnerJFrost wrote:
MisteriousFate wrote:At least you took it in a good way (I think)

I did.

That's good for you then because criticism can be taken in for the worse, or for the better.

TurnerJFrost wrote:By the way, can you explain how I can make this one and my FNIA Visual Novel better?

I'm not quite sure.... bUT I guess it isn't very eventful and isn't really story-driven. There are too much dialogue and not enough action. Frisk was the most uneventful one. The second most eventful is probably Sans, then PApyrus's then, of course, Undyne. In Undyne nothing hardly happens(I know you said you might update that route). All that happen was meeting her at the beach then a long explanation(at least to me) happened then he drowns. CPR took place, yay we got the ending. There should be events that build up to make the character like Chad. Not just them liking him right off the bat, saying that he's a nice guy and all. This is a cliche idea, but just ann example. For example, one of them got kidnapped and then he saves her, making her fall in love for his heroic side. Because they all just fell in love for him for no reason at all. No solid event took place to make them "like" him. In short, make more events that build up to something special in the end. Not just sexual things.
"I may not be able to beat you even if we played 10 more games, but if I have
a chance of beating you on the 101th time, I'll challenge you again and again."

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Re: AnimeTale (FNIA x Undertale) Visual Novel

Postby TurnerJFrost » Fri Jul 22, 2016 7:18 pm

MisteriousFate wrote:
TurnerJFrost wrote:
MisteriousFate wrote:At least you took it in a good way (I think)

I did.

That's good for you then because criticism can be taken in for the worse, or for the better.

By the way, can you explain how I can make this one and my FNIA Visual Novel better?
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Re: AnimeTale (FNIA x Undertale) Visual Novel

Postby SeikaUruru » Fri Jul 22, 2016 6:24 pm

TurnerJFrost wrote:
MisteriousFate wrote:At least you took it in a good way (I think)

I did.

That's good for you then because criticism can be taken in for the worse, or for the better.
"I may not be able to beat you even if we played 10 more games, but if I have
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Re: AnimeTale (FNIA x Undertale) Visual Novel

Postby TurnerJFrost » Fri Jul 22, 2016 6:20 pm

MisteriousFate wrote:At least you took it in a good way (I think)

I did.
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Re: AnimeTale (FNIA x Undertale) Visual Novel

Postby SeikaUruru » Fri Jul 22, 2016 5:24 pm

At least you took it in a good way (I think)
"I may not be able to beat you even if we played 10 more games, but if I have
a chance of beating you on the 101th time, I'll challenge you again and again."

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Re: AnimeTale (FNIA x Undertale) Visual Novel

Postby TurnerJFrost » Fri Jul 22, 2016 5:14 pm

MisteriousFate wrote:
TurnerJFrost wrote:
MisteriousFate wrote:I'm sorry but nothing interesting really happened. It almost feels like you're just using Undertale to attract views because it's not very interesting... Sorry.

Sorry about it not being very interesting. But I used Undertale because I was working on the FNIA Visual Novel and decided to try my hand on it.

... I'm sorry for being rude.

It's fine. You are a critic, and sometimes they can be harsh.
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