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Death Awaits You....

by MaakkiaSenpai | Last Updated: March 21, 2017

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August 19, 2016

Drifting on the surface,She wears a little gown.Her body feels so cold,Soaked up by the water.Like the stories -Untold. Also btw guys, I kinda went through a depression so that's why my last few novels have been kinda sad.

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Re: Death Awaits You....

Postby KyuubeiKitsune » Mon Mar 06, 2017 1:48 am

:3 :wub:
Contract? It will only cost you your soul... :3
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Re: Death Awaits You....

Postby MaakkiaSenpai » Tue Oct 11, 2016 11:36 am

SeikaUruru wrote:I'll have to give you credit for the extra animations and such, but the story is too fast paced. It starts off with no base whatsoever. Maybe you're trying to start off the story with a spark, but how you did it seems a bit rough... Again, you did great on the animations though :3

Some of my novels I just do for fun... no story or outline just writing. Plus, I liked the Nightwill render and wanted to use her properly.
"I'm a dying walrus that tried to mate with a bird, but it flew away so, I turned into an attack helicopter and chased it" - MaakkiaSenpai
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Re: Death Awaits You....

Postby SeikaUruru » Mon Oct 10, 2016 11:29 pm

I'll have to give you credit for the extra animations and such, but the story is too fast paced. It starts off with no base whatsoever. Maybe you're trying to start off the story with a spark, but how you did it seems a bit rough... Again, you did great on the animations though :3
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Re: Death Awaits You....

Postby SeikaUruru » Mon Oct 10, 2016 11:25 pm

wyanette11 wrote:pls don't make the full ver. :) :) :) :) :3 :3 :3 :whee: :D

That is just straight up rude. There is a better way to say that the visual novel does not meet your expectations, and this isn't it.
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Re: Death Awaits You....

Postby MaakkiaSenpai » Sat Aug 27, 2016 3:29 pm

wyanette11 wrote:pls don't make the full ver. :) :) :) :) :3 :3 :3 :whee: :D

Is it because you don't like it or,you just don't want me to make it worse?
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Re: Death Awaits You....

Postby wyanette11 » Fri Aug 26, 2016 11:24 pm

pls don't make the full ver. :) :) :) :) :3 :3 :3 :whee: :D
Every were you go i will be there! :3
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Death Awaits You....

Postby MaakkiaSenpai » Fri Aug 19, 2016 11:40 pm

Drifting on the surface,She wears a little gown.Her body feels so cold,Soaked up by the water.Like the stories -Untold.
"I'm a dying walrus that tried to mate with a bird, but it flew away so, I turned into an attack helicopter and chased it" - MaakkiaSenpai
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