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ElfenLied89

Two Paths - A Small Romantic Novel

by ElfenLied89 | Last Updated: August 23, 2015

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August 19, 2015

A test run on making a visual novel for me.

You have two paths to make. Which one will you choose? Each path leads you down a different course.

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Re: Two Paths

Postby SeikaUruru » Mon Aug 01, 2016 12:49 pm

Okay so far. Nothing that noteworthy happened but I look forward to the next update.
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Re: Two Paths

Postby Sonya » Thu Aug 27, 2015 2:10 pm

ElfenLied89 wrote:
Like this, I made a quick tutorial on how to: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tWbqGfdkyO0

You don't have to though, I'm just suggesting it~


No no no. It's a good idea. :) I prefer suggestions and I don't mind doing them if it is reasonable. I don't have much to do today anyways in form of school work so perhaps I will get to it. :P

Ah okay, I look forward to it then~
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Re: Two Paths

Postby ElfenLied89 » Thu Aug 27, 2015 1:53 pm

Like this, I made a quick tutorial on how to: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tWbqGfdkyO0

You don't have to though, I'm just suggesting it~


No no no. It's a good idea. :) I prefer suggestions and I don't mind doing them if it is reasonable. I don't have much to do today anyways in form of school work so perhaps I will get to it. :P
“The past is dead. Tomorrow will become whatever decision you make it." ~ Sherrilyn Kenyon Acheron



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Re: Two Paths

Postby Sonya » Thu Aug 27, 2015 1:50 pm

ElfenLied89 wrote:
Sonya wrote:
ElfenLied89 wrote:Please comment as I would love to hear feedback and opinions! I can't draw so everything is borrowed and the only thing I can contribute is my imagination. :)

I really think it'd be nice to elaborate more on an introduction, like more on Anissa's background, etc, it feels a little rushed at the beginning! Also if you get the chance, you should add a main menu screen too, it'd be a nice addition :D


a main menu screen? how so?

Like this, I made a quick tutorial on how to: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tWbqGfdkyO0

You don't have to though, I'm just suggesting it~
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Re: Two Paths

Postby ElfenLied89 » Thu Aug 27, 2015 1:48 pm

Sonya wrote:
ElfenLied89 wrote:Please comment as I would love to hear feedback and opinions! I can't draw so everything is borrowed and the only thing I can contribute is my imagination. :)

I really think it'd be nice to elaborate more on an introduction, like more on Anissa's background, etc, it feels a little rushed at the beginning! Also if you get the chance, you should add a main menu screen too, it'd be a nice addition :D


a main menu screen? how so?
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Re: Two Paths

Postby Sonya » Tue Aug 25, 2015 10:04 pm

ElfenLied89 wrote:Please comment as I would love to hear feedback and opinions! I can't draw so everything is borrowed and the only thing I can contribute is my imagination. :)

I really think it'd be nice to elaborate more on an introduction, like more on Anissa's background, etc, it feels a little rushed at the beginning! Also if you get the chance, you should add a main menu screen too, it'd be a nice addition :D
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Re: Two Paths

Postby ElfenLied89 » Tue Aug 25, 2015 9:24 pm

Please comment as I would love to hear feedback and opinions! I can't draw so everything is borrowed and the only thing I can contribute is my imagination. :)
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Re: Two Paths

Postby ElfenLied89 » Fri Aug 21, 2015 10:59 pm

Wish I could draw. I would have a kitsune drawn out first thing. Lol. I love kitsunes :P Next would be some more characters for a paranormal romantic visual novel :wacko:
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Re: Two Paths

Postby Sonya » Fri Aug 21, 2015 10:15 pm

ElfenLied89 wrote:
Sonya wrote:LOL I love Amaya's path!
[Reveal] Spoiler:
Kiyoshi reminds me of Inuyasha/Sesshomaru or Tomoe from Kamisama Hajimemashita<3


All 3 my favorites. :) Currently reading the second one you said and have finished both anime and manga of the first ;)

hahaha, yeah they're both epic, kitsune boys are so cute :wub:
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Re: Two Paths

Postby ElfenLied89 » Fri Aug 21, 2015 10:12 pm

Sonya wrote:LOL I love Amaya's path!
[Reveal] Spoiler:
Kiyoshi reminds me of Inuyasha/Sesshomaru or Tomoe from Kamisama Hajimemashita<3


All 3 my favorites. :) Currently reading the second one you said and have finished both anime and manga of the first ;)
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