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Naga (WIP)

by Sheth | Last Updated: August 25, 2017

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April 19, 2017, 9:09 amAlmost done with the first scene~ >v>

April 19, 2017, 8:23 amStill working on the first scene, but there are

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April 17, 2017

Simple and very linear VN I'm working on to get familiar with how CloudNovel works. :>
All assets used so far are by myself.

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Re: Naga (WIP)

Postby Sheth » Wed May 24, 2017 9:19 am

Bihvani wrote:The option boxes tend to cramp the text a bit. But besides that, I love the aesthetics of this game :> It was really short, but 'm already hooked! I wish you the best in continuing this. I hope your finals are over by now and you have a bit of time to relax =)

Oh and
I was
blown out of the water
by your solid rendering of Naga's abs ;///; (I gasped out loud)



Omg, thank you so much- XD
I nearly choked on my tea when I read the last part.

Pretty much done with the finals, so I should have more than enough time to get get working on this again once once I've caught a little break. And as for the text-boxes, thanks for the feedback! It's a pretty easy fix so I might even get it done today. ovo

Quick question though, if you don't mind- How do you feel about the dialogue options? I'm trying to go for something which is diverse enough to create a feeling of choice, without any of the given options feeling too unnatural to most readers. Don't know if it's working out though, given I only have my own perspective.
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Re: Naga (WIP)

Postby Bihvani » Sat May 13, 2017 11:16 pm

The option boxes tend to cramp the text a bit. But besides that, I love the aesthetics of this game :> It was really short, but 'm already hooked! I wish you the best in continuing this. I hope your finals are over by now and you have a bit of time to relax =)

Oh and
I was
blown out of the water
by your solid rendering of Naga's abs ;///; (I gasped out loud)
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Re: Naga (WIP)

Postby Sheth » Sat May 06, 2017 7:31 am

Wilfredo wrote:It's an interesting game with beautiful art. I wish I can learn how to make visual novels from you.


Thank you! To be honest, I'm still pretty new to this medium so I don't think there's much I can teach. XD
I feel like a lot of people underestimate the importance of writing though. I mean, good art is great, but for me it's usually easier to enjoy a good story with bad art than it is to enjoy a bad story with good art. :>
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Re: Naga (WIP)

Postby Wilfredo » Fri May 05, 2017 2:12 pm

It's an interesting game with beautiful art. I wish I can learn how to make visual novels from you.
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Re: Naga (WIP)

Postby Sheth » Wed May 03, 2017 5:06 pm

Ruki wrote:
Sheth wrote:
Ruki wrote:This is pretty good :3 I wonder when the next update is! :D


Thank you! I'm currently focusing on my finnal exams and the sakura jam event, so not soon, but I plan to get back to it as soon as I feel like I have the time. ovo

Coincidence! My final exams are coming too X3 After that I'll start the real deal with my projects ^_^ Me and my sister really enjoyed this one XD Nevertheless, we'll wait until you're done :) Goodluck with the exams!


Thanks and best of luck to you as well! :D
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Re: Naga (WIP)

Postby Ruki » Mon May 01, 2017 11:32 am

Sheth wrote:
Ruki wrote:This is pretty good :3 I wonder when the next update is! :D


Thank you! I'm currently focusing on my finnal exams and the sakura jam event, so not soon, but I plan to get back to it as soon as I feel like I have the time. ovo

Coincidence! My final exams are coming too X3 After that I'll start the real deal with my projects ^_^ Me and my sister really enjoyed this one XD Nevertheless, we'll wait until you're done :) Goodluck with the exams!
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Re: Naga (WIP)

Postby Sheth » Mon May 01, 2017 9:12 am

Samonsea wrote:This is quite interesting I hope you continue it. I like your uniqe art style keep it up!


Thank you! Focusing on my exams and the sakura jam even at the moment, but I'l definitely get back to it when I feel like I have the time. >v>
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Re: Naga (WIP)

Postby Sheth » Mon May 01, 2017 9:06 am

Ruki wrote:This is pretty good :3 I wonder when the next update is! :D


Thank you! I'm currently focusing on my finnal exams and the sakura jam event, so not soon, but I plan to get back to it as soon as I feel like I have the time. ovo
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Re: Naga (WIP)

Postby Samonsea » Sun Apr 23, 2017 1:22 pm

This is quite interesting I hope you continue it. I like your uniqe art style keep it up!
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Re: Naga (WIP)

Postby Ruki » Sun Apr 23, 2017 9:54 am

This is pretty good :3 I wonder when the next update is! :D
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