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QueenofLove

Forgive (BL Adventure)

by QueenofLove | Last Updated: February 20, 2017

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February 14, 2017, 7:00 amProblems were fixed!

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February 12, 2017, 12:17 amReleased

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February 12, 2017

Nathaniel must learn how to forgive people. Who will teach him that?

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Re: Forgive (BL Adventure)

Postby QueenofLove » Sun Feb 19, 2017 8:24 pm

ged565 wrote:Things were rushed, I would've liked for the story to be more fleshed out and take more time with scenes and we never saw Layla again and the witch gave up really easily, but despite all this...it still had me squealing because the characters are so cuuuuuute. Soooo sooooooo cuuuuuute I caaaaaan't!!! Scene transitions and such were fluid, so I thoroughly enjoyed that aspect! All the visual aspects were quite appealing. It's just the story that I would've liked to be more fleshed out. Nevertheless, it was really cute!

You're right! I do also think that I didn't do much with the story. Thank you for still reading, though. I'm glad that you like the characters. :)
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Re: Forgive (BL Adventure)

Postby ged565 » Sun Feb 19, 2017 9:28 am

Things were rushed, I would've liked for the story to be more fleshed out and take more time with scenes and we never saw Layla again and the witch gave up really easily, but despite all this...it still had me squealing because the characters are so cuuuuuute. Soooo sooooooo cuuuuuute I caaaaaan't!!! Scene transitions and such were fluid, so I thoroughly enjoyed that aspect! All the visual aspects were quite appealing. It's just the story that I would've liked to be more fleshed out. Nevertheless, it was really cute!
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Re: Forgive (BL Adventure)

Postby QueenofLove » Tue Feb 14, 2017 10:01 am

fluffness wrote:
QueenofLove wrote:Try refreshing the page.

i tried at least 10 times, also in different days

Ok, I think I fixed them problems.
Happy Valentine's Day, too! :wub:
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Re: Forgive (BL Adventure)

Postby QueenofLove » Tue Feb 14, 2017 9:08 am

fluffness wrote:
QueenofLove wrote:Try refreshing the page.

i tried at least 10 times, also in different days

The problem is me! I'll try to fix it! X|
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Re: Forgive (BL Adventure)

Postby QueenofLove » Tue Feb 14, 2017 8:49 am

fluffness wrote:
QueenofLove wrote:Try refreshing the page.

i tried at least 10 times, also in different days

Oh, I'm sorry! :sweat: I don't know why it isn't working, then.
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Re: Forgive (BL Adventure)

Postby fluffness » Tue Feb 14, 2017 3:04 am

QueenofLove wrote:Try refreshing the page.

i tried at least 10 times, also in different days
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Re: Forgive (BL Adventure)

Postby QueenofLove » Mon Feb 13, 2017 1:35 pm

fluffness wrote:
QueenofLove wrote:
fluffness wrote:it won't load orz

What will it not load?

it stucks at 99% loading, i can't start the game

Try refreshing the page.
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Re: Forgive (BL Adventure)

Postby fluffness » Mon Feb 13, 2017 3:31 am

QueenofLove wrote:
fluffness wrote:it won't load orz

What will it not load?

it stucks at 99% loading, i can't start the game
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Re: Forgive (BL Adventure)

Postby QueenofLove » Sun Feb 12, 2017 12:00 pm

fluffness wrote:it won't load orz

What will it not load?
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Re: Forgive (BL Adventure)

Postby fluffness » Sun Feb 12, 2017 6:04 am

it won't load orz
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