Sonya wrote:Lavandulalilium36 wrote:I caught spelling and grammar errors, but this novel is really good so far
Kyle says, "It looks like you have been going your studies, after all."
Ashe says with the teacher,"Huh? What! You didn't explain or answered my question!"
when there should be answer.
Also...when ashe says"I am soon eighteen, Dad" it doesn't really make sense though I get what her point is.
On the runaway route, Ashe says, "That sounds okay. I can finally make some friends and play!"
On the runaway route, Ashe thinks, "Oh...No wonder Teacher was always so passionate during the lesson about equality..."
On the runaway route, Kyle says, "You're not the only one who doesn't want to, Ashe; there's a lot of humans who don't want to study, but still goes because it's their duty."
I hope this helps
Thanks! I'll let Minty know we found these grammatical errors!
Kay! :d Glad to be of service